Young Writers Society

Hey! I'd really appreciate a review of this:
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If you could be troubled, I'd appreciate a review of this, As it sits so far. It's the first chapter of my Futuristic/Trench Warfare/Post-apocalyptic WIP novel. It's Rated 18+ for Violence and Language Just to let you know. Thanks!


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Mono,

Will get all of these sometime later today Thanks all for being so patient.

here is the first chapter of the novel I'm working on. don't hold back.
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Doooone Anyone want to help me with my blue star?

I have a short story I wrote and then rewrote quite some time ago, if you're interested...

Dash it all, I was trying to link the title to the post, but it's been so long that I linked anything here that I don't remember how to do it...

Anyway, the title is "Drowning," I think I rated it a 16, or maybe a 12, and this is the link:

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Time for me to go write my own review of something...

~Blue

Feeling existential?

Hi! This song of mine has no reviews yet and that makes me sad.
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Thanks much!!

Title: A Hero's Day Off
Genre: Narrative Poetry/ Satire
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No rush dear, whenever you have the time <3

Audy! = D

Would you be able to review this if you get some spare time? It's the prologue to a fantasy novella. I'm mostly looking for ways to improve my prose in general, but also how it fares as a prologue / opening chapter.

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Will you review my poem for me?

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Thanks!

Audy!

I would appreciate love your review of my first attempt at poetry!

Ita and ImHero - you're the first on my list. Will be getting to it as soon as I get off of work.


Everyone else, hit me! But let me direct you to this: you will not want me to win.

When you have the time

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I'd be ever so grateful if you'd review this - it's my first attempt at lyrics, and a rewrite of one of my other poems. I don't know if the lyrical part worked so well, though, especially the chorus XD