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Fri Dec 14, 2012 2:26 pm
Karzkin says...



An older one I've recently returned to.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

K's Killa Kritiques

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Sat Dec 22, 2012 11:36 am
Hoot says...



Hello Audy,

work.php?id=98448#c341225

The above when you get time would be lovely :) Also, link me to anything you'd like reviewed and I'd be happy to return the favour.

h
  





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Tue Dec 25, 2012 7:21 pm
silented1 says...



work.php?id=98468

I wish to hear your serious tone of seriousness.
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html
  





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Wed Jan 02, 2013 12:03 am
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Firestarter says...



I have poems for you! Feel free to do just one or all three. But not two.

work.php?id=98718
work.php?id=98717
work.php?id=98693
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:52 pm
Shady says...



Hey Audy!

I'm new to poetry, but think that this work.php?id=98548 piece is fairly decent, and want to know if you agree. I was thinking of entering it into a competition, and would like to know if it's contest-worthy.

Thanks!

~Shady 8)

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Tue Nov 19, 2013 6:21 pm
Audy says...



*drinks a revive potion*
Last edited by Audy on Fri Dec 06, 2013 7:54 am, edited 2 times in total.
  





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Mon Nov 25, 2013 5:02 pm
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LadySpark says...



wallpaper skin and flower graves

:D oh oh please and thank you!
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Formerly SparkToFlame
  





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Tue Nov 26, 2013 9:04 pm
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indieeloise says...



Por favor! the carpenter's son
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco
  





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Sat Nov 30, 2013 2:19 pm
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EmmVeePi says...



Would greatly appreciate a review of my poem "I Wish I Was Him" http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106236
  





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Sun Dec 15, 2013 8:28 am
Pompadour says...



I'd really appreciate it if you could review my poem: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=106401#comments

Thanks so much!
How to format poetry on YWS

this sky where we live is no place to lose your wings
  





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Tue Apr 01, 2014 6:52 pm
rhiasofia says...



Hey Audy, I could really use a good review on these. Whichever looks interesting to you. Thanks!
Iniquities
Tchotchkes
Linonophobia
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings
  





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Wed Apr 02, 2014 1:29 am
speakerskat says...



here you go, feel free to review my other work too
Paper Hearts
Salt in the air, blood in my veins, no more black clouds, just colorful days...
  








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