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Wed Mar 26, 2014 8:14 pm
rhiasofia says...

Reviewed for @Aurora99, will someone review my poem,

When the Robins lift
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings

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Tue May 06, 2014 9:22 pm
Ermixon says...

Reviewed rhiasofia
Will someone please review my story? :smt003

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Sat May 10, 2014 6:46 pm
cleverclogs says...

Reviewed Ermixon!

I'd appreciate it if someone could review my short story:
The Last Episode
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Sun Jun 01, 2014 3:15 am
TriSARAHtops says...

Reviewed cleverclogs!
Could someone please review Eight Reasons Why I Kissed Hayden Beaufort (Part 1/8) for me please?
if we wait until we're ready
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Mon Jun 02, 2014 6:06 pm
deleted3 says...

@TriSARAHtops, your will is my review :-)

Here's my request: The Psychic Circle: Chapter 5

I hope requesting a chapter is ok? :-/ It may require some reading of previous chapters - very short chapters though!
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Mon Jul 07, 2014 9:42 pm
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Lefty says...

@etherealember - I reviewed your chapter!

Would someone mind reviewing the first chapter of my book?

The Fighter Of Aldea - Chapter 1

Last edited by Lefty on Thu Mar 03, 2016 12:33 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Jul 12, 2014 3:07 pm
Authorian says...

Reserved spot!
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Sat Mar 07, 2015 6:59 pm
cdog121201 says...

read my short story!!! Its called where is Percy?

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Thu Mar 12, 2015 1:38 am
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Satira says...

Cipa 1 please read this... I need it to get out of the free room before other works swamp it.
"if only, if only,"
the woodpecker sighed,
"the bark on the trees
were as soft as the skies."

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Tue Mar 17, 2015 7:24 am
Dracula says...

Boy Who Cried Wolf

Review this please and tell me what to improve! :D
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Tue Apr 14, 2015 3:48 pm
Dragongirl says...

Reviewed!!! Is anyone actually doing this anymore?

If so...

Devils and Demons
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Sat May 16, 2015 8:51 pm
Ashkitten83 says...

I would like someone to please write a review for my work The Secret of the Flutterby :D :D I worked really hard on it, and I really would like some input. Its a tragic love tale, not for small children, there is some adult content.

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Fri Jul 17, 2015 8:33 pm
TheStormAroundMe says...

I have reviewed Ashkitten83's The Secret of the Flutterby. It's pretty good if you guys want to check it out.

I would like someone to review, which is Chapter Two of my novel, Basecode.

Thank you guys for your help!

-Grace :D
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Sun Aug 02, 2015 4:08 am
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Kale says...

Once upon a time, this thread was known as Review the Person Above You, and in the tradition of the forum games of old, it provided forty-odd people with reviews. But then it died the slow death of inactivity and was thus repurposed for review trades.

For posterity, here lies the original first post:

Spoiler! :
Review the Person Above You

What the title says! Basically, you review the last person who posted in this thread and then post a reply linking a work you want reviewed. The next person reviews you and posts a link to their work, and on it happily goes.

To prevent unfortunate cases where you review someone, but someone else posts their request faster than you, you can reserve a spot with a post. However, you can't request a review until after you've reviewed the person above you.


- Review the person above you. Or else. If you don't, your post will be deleted.

- Play nice. That means no spam/one-liner reviews.

- If you reserve a post, don't take longer than a day to do the actual review.

What happens if someone doesn't follow the rules?

If you catch someone not following the rules, shoot one of us green folks a PM. We'll deal with that dratted rule-breaker and see that a review is sent the proper way. :)


To get things started: The Greater Evil

@TheStormAroundMe should be getting a review from member of the Resources Crew within the next few days.
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Thu Aug 13, 2015 7:44 am
Lorelie says...

Kyllorac wrote:As with all threads in WRFF, there are a few requirements to follow:

For Trade Posters:

Only one open trade at a time. A trade is considered open if it is the last trade request post in the thread.

And when is it considered ended?

# of Reviews Desired: 3
Willing to Review: Short Stories and short "Novel Chapters"
Will NOT Review: Poetry. And if it's a novel, keep in mind I won't read previous chapters first.

Title: 1 Too early might as well be worse than too late
Genre: Novel / Chapter (first chapter)
Length: Satisfactory (about 800 words)
Synopsis: "Chapter 1" or "Too early might as well be worse than too late" Novel starts here... *flashing red lights*

Enjoy! :wink:
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— Mary Kay Ash

— Someone Incredibly Noncommittal

He knew that elbow.
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