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Wed Jan 09, 2013 9:05 pm
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kayfortnight says...



Alright, I reviewed AliceDreams's chapter. Can someone review Twisted Fate? It's the first chapter.
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Mon Feb 11, 2013 8:34 pm
dogs says...



I gotcha covered Fornight! :), could someone help me out with this piece though? It's my first actually half way decent short story but it needs a lot of work because my short story writing is not particuarly good.

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Wed Mar 27, 2013 10:32 pm
CandidDreamer says...



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Hi guys. This is the first chapter of my book Risk. It is uneddited, so please forgive the errors. Thank you so much. Please go check it out an d leave a review. Any request of any sort can be made :)
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Sun Jun 16, 2013 4:25 pm
serenephantom says...



Dear, Candiddreamer
Your review is done and I hope it helped in one way or another.
Now if the person who post below me would be so kind as to review the first chapter of my story.
The Witch's Feather (Chapter One)
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Thu Jul 04, 2013 2:11 pm
sbitonti says...



Serenephantom :)

Going to review your chapter now! The title sounds good, can't wait.

I hope the person below me, or anyone really, would be interested in reviewing my work, The Caffeine.

Link:
The Caffeine

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Sat Jul 20, 2013 6:48 pm
ImHero says...



My specialty :)

The Scientist
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Wed Jul 31, 2013 10:36 pm
StoneHeart says...



On it, sa!

I had warned you.
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sat Sep 21, 2013 12:50 am
wildwildcat says...



On it, @BlackNether12 !
Funny since I asked you in your own thread, but here's the link to mine!
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Wed Dec 25, 2013 11:42 am
Laure says...



@wildwildcat

I should review one of your works now. *NEBULA!*
  





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Fri Jan 03, 2014 2:40 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



I don't know how to link this but if you look on my profile you will find it
Potential comes in black and white
Looking for constructive criticism!
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Sat Jan 04, 2014 11:33 am
Laure says...



Looks like I'm reviewing you.
  





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Mon Jan 06, 2014 5:41 am
TakeThatYouFiend says...



I I will review you, cause I want
"Watercolour Winter"
Reviewed.
:-)
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Mon Feb 24, 2014 4:17 am
rawrafied says...



Poetry's not my forte but I can give it a shot. ^_^

Can someone review this: Salvation of Ignorance - Chapter 1: Yes, A Charming Man, Indeed.
  





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Mon Mar 24, 2014 2:34 am
TheCrimsonLady says...



Hello! Can someone review: Sorceress, Chapter 5?

Oops, I posted twice. Just click on the link in my second post, I guess!
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Mon Mar 24, 2014 2:53 am
TheCrimsonLady says...



Hello!

Would someone mind reviewing

Sorceress: Chapter 5

Thanks!
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