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Thu Feb 16, 2012 8:06 pm
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callmeike says...



I don't really know how this works honestly haha. I'm probably over thinking this, but whoever I have to review then just pm me and i'll do it :P. And if you want to review me check http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93378 that out
  





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Fri Mar 16, 2012 8:47 am
ali says...



Dear alfredsymon,
Your work has been reviewed.It's nice. My work is in the browse column.
  





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Thu Mar 29, 2012 5:48 am
SidereaAquila says...



Ali,

What is your piece called? I'll review it, but I can't find it.

Here's the first chapter of my novel: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94187
Skittles: Taste the Spectrum

LIZARD!!!!!
  





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Thu Apr 05, 2012 1:17 pm
summergrl13 says...



work.php?id=94462

Please check it out, give me a little feedback, maybe like it... :wink: and I'll do the same for you :D
I will review for you! PM about it if you need one!


Come check out my new story at topic53543.html
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2012 2:16 am
Shady says...



Done!
work.php?id=94510

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Fri Apr 13, 2012 12:33 am
Cspr says...



Hey, ShadowVyper,

I wrote a review on this: work.php?id=94510

If you could, I'd love for you to either write a review on Sunshine or Pagan (they're short stories). If you can't find them, I'll try to find you a link or maybe let you see a Google Doc version?
My SPD senses are tingling.
  





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Sat Apr 14, 2012 2:53 am
Gg127 says...



Hey! Please review my new poem, Symphony :)

work.php?id=94554
  





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Wed May 09, 2012 10:52 pm
kathyloop says...



To the next poster, please review my Alexandra - Chapter 1 Revised . Thanks a million!
To alfredsymon, getting ready to read Amber Rise.
  





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Thu May 10, 2012 9:29 pm
kathyloop says...



Sorry, I did a review on wrong person but fixed it. Someone please review mine: work.php?id=95202
  





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Tue Jul 17, 2012 7:57 pm
stevie415017 says...



Done i have re reviewed your story.
he is my first two chapters of The war of night and day work.php?id=96193
hope you enjoy. :P
  





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Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:25 am
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ImHero says...



Done!

Please review this next person!

work.php?id=96570
new profile: profile.php?u=36729
  





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Wed Aug 29, 2012 6:02 pm
Shady says...



Well this is awkward...I reviewed that piece quite a while ago...but I want to throw mine out there...I know!

To the next reviewer: Please review Hero's work first- work.php?id=96570
and then mine, which is Chapter Three of my story, divided into two parts, which can be found right here...

Part one: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97113
Part two: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97115

If you PM me your link, when you post it on here, I'll review it. That way you'll get two reviews, in exchanged for giving two...yeah, that should work. :D

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Mon Sep 03, 2012 12:23 am
chazbc4 says...



Done Shadowviper.

Please review if you can be bothered, it's a long one! work.php?id=97209
  





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Tue Jan 01, 2013 7:53 pm
TheWorldIsMyLife says...



Well, your story is a dot. If you've moved it to a different location I'd be happy to review it but for the next poster:
work.php?id=98716
That's the second chapter. I'd probably advise you to read the first one too but I'm more bothered about the review for the second one as I don't have many on there :D
"We can lick gravity but sometimes the paperwork is overwhelming." ~ Wernher von Braun
  





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Reviews: 8
Thu Jan 03, 2013 9:35 pm
AliceDreams says...



Hiya! This is my first time on this website so please excuse any mistakes...
I started writing this piece as stress release, but I'd be interested to see what anyone else thinks. It does swear a bit, and is intended as an opening chapteer to a longer novel. Thank you for taking the time to read!

work.php?id=98795
  








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