Young Writers Society

I don't really know how this works honestly haha. I'm probably over thinking this, but whoever I have to review then just pm me and i'll do it . And if you want to review me check http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93378 that out

Dear alfredsymon,
Your work has been reviewed.It's nice. My work is in the browse column.

Ali,

What is your piece called? I'll review it, but I can't find it.

Here's the first chapter of my novel: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=94187

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Please check it out, give me a little feedback, maybe like it... and I'll do the same for you

Done!
work.php?id=94510

Hey, ShadowVyper,

I wrote a review on this: work.php?id=94510

If you could, I'd love for you to either write a review on Sunshine or Pagan (they're short stories). If you can't find them, I'll try to find you a link or maybe let you see a Google Doc version?

Hey! Please review my new poem, Symphony

work.php?id=94554

To the next poster, please review my Alexandra - Chapter 1 Revised . Thanks a million!
To alfredsymon, getting ready to read Amber Rise.

Sorry, I did a review on wrong person but fixed it. Someone please review mine: work.php?id=95202

Done i have re reviewed your story.
he is my first two chapters of The war of night and day work.php?id=96193
hope you enjoy.

Done!

Please review this next person!

work.php?id=96570

Well this is awkward...I reviewed that piece quite a while ago...but I want to throw mine out there...I know!

To the next reviewer: Please review Hero's work first- work.php?id=96570
and then mine, which is Chapter Three of my story, divided into two parts, which can be found right here...

Part one: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97113
Part two: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97115

If you PM me your link, when you post it on here, I'll review it. That way you'll get two reviews, in exchanged for giving two...yeah, that should work.

~Shady

Done Shadowviper.

Please review if you can be bothered, it's a long one! work.php?id=97209

Well, your story is a dot. If you've moved it to a different location I'd be happy to review it but for the next poster:
work.php?id=98716
That's the second chapter. I'd probably advise you to read the first one too but I'm more bothered about the review for the second one as I don't have many on there

Hiya! This is my first time on this website so please excuse any mistakes...
I started writing this piece as stress release, but I'd be interested to see what anyone else thinks. It does swear a bit, and is intended as an opening chapteer to a longer novel. Thank you for taking the time to read!

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