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Tue Sep 29, 2015 1:42 am
Aley says...



TheStormAroundMe wrote:I have reviewed Ashkitten83's The Secret of the Flutterby. It's pretty good if you guys want to check it out.

I would like someone to review https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=121200, which is Chapter Two of my novel, Basecode.

Thank you guys for your help!

-Grace :D


Hey! I commented that I got your review done in the review but I'm also going to note it here. You've been reviewed <3
  





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Thu Nov 19, 2015 7:06 am
TimmyJake says...



Let's get this going again!

I don't have a piece to be reviewed as it's been a while since I've posted something, but as a random work... Lol To get it going, I'll review the piece of whoever reviews the piece below~

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Mon Jul 11, 2016 6:41 am
Laurenh6 says...



Hi could someone please review my most recent version of Watching ?
It's an improved version and is Chapter 1.
Thanks :)

Watching
  





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Fri Jul 22, 2016 2:17 pm
JuliasSneezer says...



Hey, all! Anyone who reviews mine can just post at the bottom of their review the link to something they want me to review, and I'll review as soon as I can!

I would like two or three reviews, I'm not exactly picky. :P
Willing to Review: Short stories and novel chapters in the fantasy genre, song lyrics, fantasy, magic, action, adventure, that sort of thing.
Will NOT Review: Essays, and poems.

Title: The Cave The Cave - Chapter III - Wizard of Oz Vibes
Genre: Action/Adventure, Humor.
Length: 2414 words.

Synopsis: Julia and her three friends discover a large kingdom underground, and need to get Oliver healed, while also trying to find a way out of the place.

Thanks! :pirate3:

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Sun Aug 14, 2016 6:31 am
Laurenh6 says...



Hi! Would anyone be interested in reading my series of the Watching - there's only 3 chapters at the moment . But I'd love to read along with any novels people have in return :) - thanks !

Oh and here's the links

Watching

Watching Chapter 2

Watching Chapter 3
  





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Mon Nov 21, 2016 4:29 pm
occymay says...



Hello, would anyone like to review my completed novel Knowing Gods: The Truth Will Set You Free. I have the first three chapters on here. It's a fantasy YA set in modern day London.

Chapter 1- Knowing Gods chapter 1

Chapter 2- Knowing Gods Chapter 2

Chapter 3- Knowing Gods Chapter 3

Things I will review- Has to be fiction though I don't mind what genre (Except horror or ghost) though I primarily read fantasy. I also don't mind what length. I don't do poetry, sorry :/ Thank you.
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Sat Jan 14, 2017 5:58 am
AlyTheBookworm says...



Willing to Review/Will NOT Review: Will review shorts, Chapter/Novel stuff, Fantasy.. Anything but poetry or the 20th chapter of a story. I don't want to have to go back and read any more than eight previous chapters.

Title: Luminous
Genre: Fantasy, Dramatic
Length: 6,138 words (Since Luminous is really three and a half compiled chapters of my story, I will review two or more of your works depending on their length)

Synopsis: Ryn is an orphan. A slave in all but name to a master-smith named Thord. She's never known nor questioned why he'd taken her in, a pitiful street urchin who could only remember a name, when he had no real reason to.. But she's about to get answers.

(If you write a review, give me the links to the works you want me to review at the bottom)
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 12:31 am
serenephantom says...



Hello! I reviewed the first two chapters of Luminous for you. Would you be so kind to review as well? Also, I am fully ready to trade review for review for someone else.

Title: The Abel and Cain Institution of Higher Learning (Ch. 1-2)
Genre: Teen Fiction
Length: 2,754


Blurb: Everyone deserves a chance for higher education; even future murderers.
Don't question it for if you do, you will just be lost in my world.
  





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Mon Jun 12, 2017 12:34 am
serenephantom says...



AlyTheBookworm wrote:[b]Willing to Review/Will NOT Review


Hello! I reviewed the first two chapters of Luminous for you. Would you be so kind to review as well?

Title: The Abel and Cain Institution of Higher Learning (Ch. 1-2)
Genre: Teen Fiction
Length: 2,754


Blurb: Everyone deserves a chance for higher education; even future murderers.
Don't question it for if you do, you will just be lost in my world.
  





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Thu Jul 27, 2017 4:40 pm
Midnightmoon says...



Would some one review my newest post? It's called The Job. I'll review whatever you like in return.
  





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Wed Aug 02, 2017 7:15 pm
zaminami says...



Heyo! My name is DemonGoddess and I was wondering if you could review my piece!

# of Reviews Desired: As many as possible
Willing to Review: Anything except below --
Will NOT Review: I will not review anti-atheism or anti-LGBTQ+ works and nonfiction, a well as any poetry only a professional will review.

Title: There's a Fine Line.
Genre: LGBTQ+ romantic; Chapter; Fanfiction (you don't need to know fandoms to read)
Length: Really long. There are also two additional parts.

Synopsis of the first few chapters: Tord builds a giant robot, and Tom is assigned to stop him. When Tom succeeds, Tord confesses that he has voices in his head. When they meet a girl named Crystal at the psychiatrist's office (I didn't write this part yet. It's in the outline), their lives change.

Links: - There's a Fine Line Prologue (GORE WARNING)
- There's a Fine Line Chapter 1.1 (Swearing warning)
- There's a Fine Line Chapter 1.2

I want to review for RevMo :D --

Kara
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Fri Sep 29, 2017 12:37 pm
katesing2016 says...



Hey y'all! Hoping you could give some love to the first two chapters in my book, "Fear".

I'd be happy to return the favor.

Thanks and have a beautiful day!
  





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Fri May 28, 2021 5:54 pm
1dratherbewriting says...



Hey, I would love to do Amber Rise, but can someone do my poem, its called, "Rainy Day"
  





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Fri May 28, 2021 5:55 pm
1dratherbewriting says...



ph crap sorry im new, ill review one of the chapters
  








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