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Sun Jul 29, 2012 7:15 pm
PixieStix says...



Hey, Twit! Would you mind reviewing this new poem for me? Thanks!
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!
  





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Tue Aug 07, 2012 6:39 pm
Twit says...



Done everyone!
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


#TNT
  





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Tue Aug 21, 2012 8:21 am
Twit says...



*le bump*
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


#TNT
  





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Wed Aug 22, 2012 12:56 am
Aurrora says...



Hi! My story is The Devil In the Wishing Well, but it's in three parts. It's not hugely long altogether (almost 4,000 words) and I would really, really appreciate it if you read all three. But I don't mind if you only read one or two parts (though I doubt they would make sense out of order). It's for a contest, and I really, really need constructive feedback!
This is for the first part, and it links to the others: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=96979

Thanks!
Hi :)
  





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Wed Aug 22, 2012 4:27 am
psudiname says...



could you review the first three chapters of my fiction novel?
work.php?id=96937
work.php?id=96948
work.php?id=96986
thanks,
---Psudiname
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  





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Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:50 pm
HostofHorus says...



Hey Twit! Could I bother you to review this poem for me?

http://youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97121
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
http://JRSStories.com
Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Thu Aug 30, 2012 7:50 pm
Shady says...



Hey Twit!

I have finished chapter 3. It got a bit long, so I seperated it into two parts.

Part One: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97113
and
Part Two: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97115

Thanks! :pirate3:

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Thu Sep 06, 2012 3:19 pm
Twit says...



Done!
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


#TNT
  





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Sat Sep 08, 2012 9:52 pm
ahhhsmusch says...



Hello, I would love a good critique

work.php?id=97285

Thanks,
Ahhhsmusch
  





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Sun Sep 09, 2012 2:55 pm
Sins says...



Twit, you poo face, could you destroy this for me?

work.php?id=97263

Please and thank you.
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Thu Sep 13, 2012 11:05 pm
Twit says...



Done!
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


#TNT
  





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Sun Sep 16, 2012 11:00 pm
summergrl13 says...



Chapter 5 of my novel! work.php?id=97373 (go ahead and read the other chapters, no need to review them if you don't want to though) Please and thank you :D
I will review for you! PM about it if you need one!


Come check out my new story at topic53543.html
  





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Mon Sep 17, 2012 12:16 pm
Sins says...



i powsted anuva chapta ov my novel!!!!!! Would you care to give it a glance, dear fellow? I deeply thank you.

work.php?id=97385
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Mon Sep 17, 2012 6:07 pm
DiskElemental says...



A 1700(ish) word short story about a scientist and the girl he keeps locked in the basement.

work.php?id=97383

Thanks in advance!
A man without a plan, or anything else for that matter. (Except a review thread).
  








Who wants to become a writer? And why? Because it’s the answer to everything. It’s the streaming reason for living. To note, to pin down, to build up, to create, to be astonished at nothing, to cherish the oddities, to let nothing go down the drain, to make something, to make a great flower out of life, even if it’s a cactus.
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