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Tue Jul 17, 2018 6:44 pm
inktopus says...



At one point you were following my novel. If you're not interested in reading the chapter up until this one, please review this chapter that's still trapped in the GR: The Moon Needs Her Night 23

If you're still interested in catching up with the story, then I'd obviously much rather you do that lol. Thanks for reviewing, regardless!
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Tue Jul 17, 2018 7:39 pm
GodfreysBouillon says...



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Last edited by GodfreysBouillon on Mon Jan 11, 2021 10:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Tue Jul 17, 2018 8:14 pm
Vervain says...



Y'all are both exceptions! I promise both of these things are top of my list. They'll get done either tonight or tomorrow as soon as my real life stuff gets sorted.

With that said, I'm still accepting one request!
stay off the faerie paths
  





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Fri Jul 20, 2018 7:37 pm
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Pompadour says...



hellohello, could i please get a review on this?

on the wire [part one]

i'm looking for a critique that is less focused on grammar iffies (although comments on style and pacing i do not mind at all). i'm most concerned about characterisation + stuff i mentioned in the A/N, so if you could look that over i'd be much obliged. <3
How to format poetry on YWS

this sky where we live is no place to lose your wings
  





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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:39 pm
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Emmzziee says...



Alison
Same as Pompadour, I'm not so much looking for a grammar review but an overall-story review :) Thanks!
I want to play a game.
  





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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:49 pm
Vervain says...



@Emmzziee I am currently only accepting one request at a time. You are free to request once I've completed Pomp's request. Thank you!
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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:54 pm
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Emmzziee says...



Oops. Sorry, Lareine! I was so eager. No worries!
I want to play a game.
  





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Sun Jul 29, 2018 1:05 am
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Vervain says...



@Pompadour your review has been completed! (And I didn't really talk about the representation bc I don't feel it's a problem >> so take that as you will)

Accepting requests now <3
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Fri Aug 03, 2018 10:14 pm
14fancycheer says...



It's not very long or good, but if you have time.
Human
  





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Mon Aug 13, 2018 11:41 pm
Fishr says...



No Name

Please
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Sat Dec 22, 2018 6:00 am
Aranya says...



Hi Vervain

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much
  








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