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Sun Jun 21, 2015 9:54 pm
EnderFlash says...



Yeah, it's fine if its delayed .3. Please review?

A Slightly Special Morning (But not THAT amazing)

I would like advice on how to incorporate the environment more (since I seem to be pretty bad at description). Thanks!
  





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Mon Jun 29, 2015 1:57 pm
Vervain says...



All done; I'm (quite obviously) back from my trip, so request away!
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Thu Jul 16, 2015 12:52 am
Vervain says...



(bump to let y'all know I'm still alive and accepting, at 0/3)
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Thu Jul 16, 2015 3:01 am
Dragongirl says...



Hello! Could you review this chapter of my story!

A Modern Day Knight. Chapter 1.
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Fri Jul 17, 2015 8:43 pm
TheStormAroundMe says...



Tear this piece to bits! I'm ready! https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/TheStormAroundMe/Chapter-One-121099
-Grace
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Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:12 am
ThatAndalite says...



Could I get a review on this?https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/ThatAndalite/The-Demons-Game-Arianna-122400

Thank you!
~the bab(thatandalite)
  





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Sun Jul 19, 2015 12:31 am
Vervain says...



Sorry for the delay on these! They'll all be done within the next day, promise.

That puts me at 3/3, so requests are temporarily closed until I get these filled~
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Fri Jul 24, 2015 4:35 am
Vervain says...



I'm so so so so so sorry that it's taking me this long to do things. Stuff has come up, and a lot of it—I think I'm going to have to shut down my WRFF thread for a while, so after this post, requests are closed.

For the two of you I still haven't reviewed, @TheStormAroundMe, @ThatAndalite, I'll get your reviews done as soon as possible. Thank you so so so so much for your patience!
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 12:05 am
Vervain says...



So I'm open and accepting again!

A note: Requests will probably take me a day or two to get around to, but I am still accepting only 3 at a time, so hopefully I'll be able to get them in. If I take more than two days, feel free to poke me and ask what's up -- most likely, I got really involved in something and forgot I had requests still waiting, oops.

So, with that in mind! Accepting once more!
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 8:12 am
EmmVeePi says...



Hey there, I heard harsh reviews and was sold. I am currently working on my retelling of Norse Mythology and am so far through the creation narrative. I would very much appreciate your criticism https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/EmmVeePi/Norse-Creation-Narrative-122887 Please, and thank you in advance.
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Wed Sep 16, 2015 8:05 pm
paula08 says...



Hi, can you review this poem for me please?

Endangered

Thanks in advance :)
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Thu Sep 17, 2015 3:19 am
Vervain says...



@EmmVeePi @paula08 - both done! And thank you very much for your requests~

Accepting: 0/3
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Thu Sep 17, 2015 12:22 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 2.1] for me! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Tue Sep 22, 2015 3:40 am
Storygirl95 says...



Hi! If you're still reviewing, I would appreciate if you would review mine!
Photographs Are Worth More Than A Thousand Words If You Look At Them The Right Way
I love to get feedback from a lot of people. If you're busy, I understand! Have a good day!
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Tue Oct 27, 2015 1:46 am
Vervain says...



Hey! Sorry, but I didn't realize it had been this long; I'm going to go ahead and re-close this thread, because it doesn't look like I'll be able to keep it open. Sorry to disappoint!
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