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Wed Sep 10, 2014 12:56 am
Vervain says...



@Jumpyspot - done!

@AlexSushiDog - done!
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Wed Sep 10, 2014 9:43 pm
Cithara says...



Wait you have a review thread.
Yes.
Okay, can you please review this? Thank you <3
Ode to Braces
Pax in Christo


"My heart is racing even as I write,
but I plan to go on as bravely as a heroine in a
novel."~The Hired Girl


I used to be Thewriter13
  





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Thu Sep 11, 2014 8:55 am
Dracula says...



If you have any free between between completing all these requests, please review The Story of Monoceros. Instead of a normal review could you please answer this question... If this was a picture book, would you buy it for your child? Why or why not?
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Thu Sep 11, 2014 9:17 pm
paula08 says...



Hi!
Can you review this poem for me please?
A breath of lavender
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Wed Sep 17, 2014 8:24 am
LosPresidentes says...



The Wanderer
^ my serious one


As free as a fly(Slightly Edited)

^ not so so serious
I quit
  





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Wed Sep 17, 2014 9:31 am
Vervain says...



@Thewriter13, @jazzydracula, @paula08 - done!

Los, I'm on them like flies on vinegar ;D
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Wed Sep 17, 2014 3:34 pm
warionack25 says...



Hey there Ancient, I remember seeing you on the chat last night, and if I recall you were a pretty cool cat! I look forward to reading your work and possibly even being your friend (cross fingers that wasn't awkward and move on)
Anyway, you should look at my first real post on here: Up The Spine

And tell me what you think!

If you would like I'd always be up for looking at your newest stuff and giving you an honest critique!
  





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Sun Sep 28, 2014 5:03 pm
Vervain says...



@LosCadaver, @warionack25 - done!
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Tue Oct 07, 2014 3:08 pm
Vervain says...



Week-and-a-half bump. Anyone got requests?
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Wed Oct 08, 2014 1:44 am
beans says...



Would love a review on Chapter 5 of Ascension, it's kind of been rotting in the green room for some time
  





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Sat Oct 11, 2014 12:38 pm
Sins says...



Hey ancient :)

Could you do me a huge favour and review the second chapter of my novel for me?

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (Chapter Two)

Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Sun Oct 12, 2014 5:11 am
Dracula says...



So only do one if you don't want to do both, but they've been sitting in the Green Room for a while with only one review.

Foxglove: Chapter Three

Foxglove: Chapter Four

They're really small so it shouldn't be hard.

Thank you!!
I bought a cactus. A week later it died. I got depressed because I thought Damn, I am less nurturing than a desert.
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Fri Nov 14, 2014 1:05 am
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I am sososo sorry that I didn't get to any of these -- do y'all still want them? @jazzydracula, @beans, @Skins
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Fri Nov 14, 2014 5:02 am
beans says...



Go for it, I'd love your insight
  





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