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Fri Nov 14, 2014 6:22 am
Dracula says...



Only if you've got the time. :)
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Sun Mar 22, 2015 1:36 pm
Lightsong says...



Please review this short story of mine. :) Link: Power of the Secret Keeper
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Mon Mar 23, 2015 10:51 pm
Vervain says...



Oh gosh, it's really been a while ^^ I'll get right on it!
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Tue Mar 24, 2015 3:44 am
yizhongt says...



If you have the time, please review:

Celestial: Spark of War; Prologue & Chapter 1

And the subsequent chapters if you have the time.
  





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Fri Apr 03, 2015 7:22 pm
Vervain says...



Apologies for how long it's taken. @Labrador's request is done; working on yours now, @yizhongt.
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Sat May 23, 2015 6:21 pm
Vervain says...



Now accepting requests again. The first post has been updated, so check it out at your leisure, but here's the important part:
I will only be taking 3 requests at a time, to keep myself evenly paced and not overwhelmed.


Current: 0/3
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Sun May 24, 2015 9:59 am
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Last edited by fight4whatisright on Fri Sep 18, 2015 5:12 am, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Sun May 24, 2015 10:08 am
Vervain says...



@fight4whatisright, I'm going to ask you to read the first post in this thread. While I'd be glad to give you feedback on your novel, that's not really a review per se, and it involves asking me to review an entire novel when my rule is one chapter at a time. Thanks, and come again.
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Sun May 24, 2015 4:22 pm
paula08 says...



Hi! Can you review my poem please? The mind of music
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Fri May 29, 2015 5:23 am
Pseudonified says...



Hi there! I just posted this recently, think you can give it a read and review? :) It's a prologue to a novel I've been working on for quite a while now.

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/Pseudonified/A-Royal-Reborn-Prologue-121326
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Mon Jun 01, 2015 10:52 am
Vervain says...



Apologies for these taking so long! I'll be getting to them today—thank you for your patience!

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Wed Jun 03, 2015 6:53 pm
artybirdy says...



Hey! Here's my short story:

The Stolen Bride

Thanks a lot if you're able to review. If not, I understand. :)
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Fri Jun 05, 2015 1:52 am
Vervain says...



@paula08, @Pseudonified, @ArtStyx, all done! Sorry it took so long for some of these; I kind of needed a kick in the pants.

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Fri Jun 05, 2015 9:45 am
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@Arkhaion

Thanks! :D
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Sun Jun 21, 2015 9:53 am
Vervain says...



I'll be out of town for the next couple of days; if anyone wants a review, be aware that it will be delayed.

(also, bump)
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