@fight4whatisright, I'm going to ask you to read the first post in this thread. While I'd be glad to give you feedback on your novel, that's not really a review per se, and it involves asking me to review an entire novel when my rule is one chapter at a time. Thanks, and come again.
I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin. — David Eddings
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