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Tue Jul 17, 2018 6:44 pm
inktopus says...



At one point you were following my novel. If you're not interested in reading the chapter up until this one, please review this chapter that's still trapped in the GR: The Moon Needs Her Night 23

If you're still interested in catching up with the story, then I'd obviously much rather you do that lol. Thanks for reviewing, regardless!
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Tue Jul 17, 2018 7:39 pm
GodfreysBouillon says...



Hey!

A couple days ago you said to remind you to review my stuff because you always forgot, and i did. Just here to remind you again if you need it.

You are of course free to pick anything I've written to review, and you asked me outside of this thread so i don't know if the rules here apply to me but I'll just assume they do.

Here, you can choose which one of these you want to review, they're just two stories that i would like reviewed specifically.

Option 1- Ramla
Here's the beginning to my novel, so if you want to read the series from the beginning this is what you'll need. You seem to already be aware of whats it about, just keep in mind that it was written a long time ago and is pretty badly done compared to my more recent works.

Option 2-
Ramla Final
If you just want a singular, quick review, this is where i'll need it the most. This is my most recent review and while it has some flaws, I think I did pretty well, at least compared to other chapters. Give it a look if you're not afraid of spoiling the ending of the series.

Whatever one you choose, beginning to a saga or just a quick review, I'll be eternally grateful for your help.

Thanks so much!
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Tue Jul 17, 2018 8:14 pm
Vervain says...



Y'all are both exceptions! I promise both of these things are top of my list. They'll get done either tonight or tomorrow as soon as my real life stuff gets sorted.

With that said, I'm still accepting one request!
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Fri Jul 20, 2018 7:37 pm
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Pompadour says...



hellohello, could i please get a review on this?

on the wire [part one]

i'm looking for a critique that is less focused on grammar iffies (although comments on style and pacing i do not mind at all). i'm most concerned about characterisation + stuff i mentioned in the A/N, so if you could look that over i'd be much obliged. <3
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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:39 pm
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Emmzziee says...



Alison
Same as Pompadour, I'm not so much looking for a grammar review but an overall-story review :) Thanks!
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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:49 pm
Vervain says...



@Emmzziee I am currently only accepting one request at a time. You are free to request once I've completed Pomp's request. Thank you!
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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:54 pm
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Emmzziee says...



Oops. Sorry, Lareine! I was so eager. No worries!
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Sun Jul 29, 2018 1:05 am
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Vervain says...



@Pompadour your review has been completed! (And I didn't really talk about the representation bc I don't feel it's a problem >> so take that as you will)

Accepting requests now <3
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Fri Aug 03, 2018 10:14 pm
14fancycheer says...



It's not very long or good, but if you have time.
Human
  





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Mon Aug 13, 2018 11:41 pm
Fishr says...



No Name

Please
Formally known as Samuel Garrison

  





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Sat Dec 22, 2018 6:00 am
Aranya says...



Hi Vervain

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much
  








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