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Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:23 am
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Lareine says...



[[First post currrently under renovation]]

Let me start off by saying that I can be the gentlest reviewer in the world if you want me to be. It's just not my norm, so if you want a nice review as opposed to a harsh one, please specify.

I will ask that you please link me to whatever it is you want me to review. It makes my job easier, which means it's less time between you requesting and me reviewing.

What I will review: Anything. I don't care if it's your 12-year-old poetry or your avant-garde performance script, your prospective novel on its third draft or its twentieth, a first chapter or a last -- toss it at me.

On novels: I will not read and review entire novels unless you specifically request this and recognize that I will only be able to complete a couple of reviews a day. It may take me the better part of a month to get through your novel, and if you are not my only request for that month, it may take me even longer.

I do tend to be fairly harsh. If you'd rather I not be, mention that in your request. If you want a review on some specific -- grammar, plot, characterization, punctuation, flow, dialogue -- mention that in your request. If you have a time-sensitive piece, such as a class assignment, that you need reviewed within 24 hours or so, mention that in your request. I'll do my best to accommodate you.

I'll take as many requests at a time, but I will be going in order for the most part -- the first request is the first review, and so forth.

//hangs up 'OPEN FOR BUSINESS' sign
Last edited by Lareine on Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:57 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:17 am
ziggiefred says...



Hello, thought I'd make the first request.
WARNING: I will tear your piece to shreds.

Please, go ahead :)
Thank you :)
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Wed Aug 07, 2013 7:47 pm
Lareine says...



Going to bump this up again. I have nothing to do until school starts, so feel free to request every review you can outta me. I'll do my best to hold my review up to standard.

I'll be on most of the time, most days, for the next week and a half.
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Tue Aug 27, 2013 6:23 pm
MysteryMe says...



You posted this a long time ago, so I'm not sure if your still reviewing, but if so I would really like it if you reviewed my story 'Mother' linked here...http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=103827

You just seem like the perfect person to do it, and I could really use your advice. Thank you!!!
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 6:10 am
Lareine says...



Whoops, well, it's been a while. Here I am again, though, ready and willing to review!
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Fri Aug 08, 2014 3:12 am
IdaPhillips says...



The Lizards

Hi, just wondering if you would mind reading this piece. It's comedic sci-fi, and it's nice and short. A review would be tremendously appreciated :)
  





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Fri Aug 08, 2014 12:29 pm
Lareine says...



Done! (There's my good deed for the year, hah.)

Any other takers?
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Fri Aug 08, 2014 3:38 pm
windrattlestheblinds says...



I'd love a review on Monachopsis if you've the time. :)
  





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Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:22 am
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Absolutely done! (Two good deeds already? At this rate, I'll have a head start on the 2020's by Monday!)
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Wed Aug 20, 2014 9:25 am
beans says...



Hey, ancient! read my story! you won't regret it.

Ok, maybe you will. But do it anyway. Builds character.
  





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Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:58 pm
Lareine says...



Is there a specific part you'd like reviewed?
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Mon Aug 25, 2014 2:06 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



Hats!
*waves* Hello over there! This wouldn't take too long to read (this may or my not be due to the fact I am to lazy to write anything particularly long) and it is throughly silly.
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Fri Aug 29, 2014 11:01 pm
JumpyDot says...



This thread is getting a bit old.
Plugged In, Not Charging
A short, humorous piece about a nerd's love letter to his dying laptop.
Hide my eyes
The back of my hand is my best friend
Medicine can't fix
A bleeding soul
Or crying ponies.
  





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Tue Sep 02, 2014 1:33 am
Lareine says...



@TakeThatYouFiend - done!

@Jumpyspot - I'm sorry it's taking me so long to get around to it; I promise I'll get to it sometime in the next year :P
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Sat Sep 06, 2014 1:05 pm
AlexSushiDog says...



The Cold Within: Chapter 1: Journal
Hey! This one is quite a biggy (6000 words) so I'm not getting much reviews. Want to check it out? :P
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