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Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:23 am
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Arkhaion says...



Hey there! If you're here, you clicked. And if you clicked, you are my best friend for life. (First post currently under renovation. I'm trying to figure out a good style for this.)

So, best friend for life, here we are.

I will ask that you please link me to whatever it is you want me to review. I honestly just don't have the energy to go trawling through portfolios to find it.

What I will review: Anything. I don't care if it's your 12-year-old poetry or your avant-garde performance script, your prospective novel on its third draft or its twentieth, a first chapter or a last -- toss it at me.

I do tend to be fairly harsh. If you'd rather I not be, feel free to mention that in your request. If you want a review on some specific -- grammar, plot, characterization, punctuation, flow, dialogue -- mention that in your request. If you have a time-sensitive piece, such as a class assignment, that you need reviewed within 24 hours or so, mention that in your request. I'll do my best to accommodate you.

I will only be taking 3 requests at a time, to keep myself evenly paced and not overwhelmed. As I said earlier, please link me to your requests, and if you would like reviews on multiple chapters of a novel, please ask one at a time to give others a fair chance at getting their reviews on time. If you request more than one chapter of a novel at a time, I will review the first chapter you requested, sequentially.
Last edited by Arkhaion on Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:57 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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Tue Oct 11, 2011 11:17 am
ziggiefred says...



Hello, thought I'd make the first request.
WARNING: I will tear your piece to shreds.

Please, go ahead :)
Thank you :)
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Wed Aug 07, 2013 7:47 pm
Arkhaion says...



Going to bump this up again. I have nothing to do until school starts, so feel free to request every review you can outta me. I'll do my best to hold my review up to standard.

I'll be on most of the time, most days, for the next week and a half.
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Tue Aug 27, 2013 6:23 pm
MysteryMe says...



You posted this a long time ago, so I'm not sure if your still reviewing, but if so I would really like it if you reviewed my story 'Mother' linked here...http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=103827

You just seem like the perfect person to do it, and I could really use your advice. Thank you!!!
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Fri Aug 01, 2014 6:10 am
Arkhaion says...



Whoops, well, it's been a while. Here I am again, though, ready and willing to review!
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Fri Aug 08, 2014 3:12 am
IdaPhillips says...



The Lizards

Hi, just wondering if you would mind reading this piece. It's comedic sci-fi, and it's nice and short. A review would be tremendously appreciated :)
  





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Fri Aug 08, 2014 12:29 pm
Arkhaion says...



Done! (There's my good deed for the year, hah.)

Any other takers?
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Fri Aug 08, 2014 3:38 pm
windrattlestheblinds says...



I'd love a review on Monachopsis if you've the time. :)
  





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Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:22 am
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Absolutely done! (Two good deeds already? At this rate, I'll have a head start on the 2020's by Monday!)
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Wed Aug 20, 2014 9:25 am
beans says...



Hey, ancient! read my story! you won't regret it.

Ok, maybe you will. But do it anyway. Builds character.
  





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Wed Aug 20, 2014 6:58 pm
Arkhaion says...



Is there a specific part you'd like reviewed?
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Mon Aug 25, 2014 2:06 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



Hats!
*waves* Hello over there! This wouldn't take too long to read (this may or my not be due to the fact I am to lazy to write anything particularly long) and it is throughly silly.
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Fri Aug 29, 2014 11:01 pm
Jumpyspot says...



This thread is getting a bit old.
Plugged In, Not Charging
A short, humorous piece about a nerd's love letter to his dying laptop.
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Tue Sep 02, 2014 1:33 am
Arkhaion says...



@TakeThatYouFiend - done!

@Jumpyspot - I'm sorry it's taking me so long to get around to it; I promise I'll get to it sometime in the next year :P
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Sat Sep 06, 2014 1:05 pm
AlexSushiDog says...



The Cold Within: Chapter 1: Journal
Hey! This one is quite a biggy (6000 words) so I'm not getting much reviews. Want to check it out? :P
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