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Thu Jan 19, 2012 1:50 am

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ScarlettWinters says...

Hey Ahmad
so i have a peice called clair and the stone statues that i posted to general fiction novels a while ago and cant seem to get many reviews on.Its a little long so that might be why. Anyway i would really appreciate if you would review.
thanks,
Scarlett

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Mon Jan 30, 2012 8:54 pm

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RedMoon says...

Hey, Ahmad. I have a new story that I just posted, and I need a review before I start working on the first chapter. Thanks. Here is the link:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93092

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Tue Jan 31, 2012 10:08 am

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Blues says...

Scarlett - do you have a link?

RedMoon - I'll get to that as soon as I can!

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Tue Jan 31, 2012 6:11 pm

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AmeliaCogin says...

work.php?id=92956

Hey Mac, hows things? Havent spoken in ages! Hows your novel coming on? Would you like me to drop in and review any new chapters for you?

And, I hope you dont mind me asking for a review...you must be busy! Thanks in advance, and the offer for reviews always stands

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Sun Feb 05, 2012 9:50 am

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Blues says...

Done!

Next please!

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Sun Feb 05, 2012 3:58 pm

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Lauren2010 says...

Ahmad! Would you mind?
work.php?id=93087

It's a short story, but kind of a long one xD

Thanks bud!

-Lauren-

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Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:50 pm

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Blues says...

Hey, Lauren!

I'll be glad to do that for you. I'll make a start tonight, and I'll probably have it done by tomorrow or after tomorrow (depending if I go to school).

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Tue Feb 07, 2012 11:25 am

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Blues says...

Done!

Aaaaanyone else?

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Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:14 am

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Jas says...

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That please! Oh and I was just wondering whether you were going to get to the think I posted a few weeks ago? It's totes fine if you can't, but maybe you forgot about it or something...?

I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~

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Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:40 am

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Blues says...

Sure!

Hm. I'm not sure about that one - I'm pretty sure I got everything done, but it looks like I must've forgotten it. I'll go over my thread to check again. Thanks for reminding me! XD

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Sat Feb 18, 2012 6:05 am

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Nargles says...

hey there Ahmad,
I was hoping you could give a review of my first piece. It is a short story called what it is like and I would love some feedback!!

thanks Nargles

Don't let the Nargles bite.
And don't let a dementor kiss you good night.

It's a charm actually. It keeps away the Nargles- Luna

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Sun Feb 19, 2012 6:28 pm

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Natural Militia says...

Hey Ahmad,

I wrote a first chapter to a novel recently titled Redemption - Chapter 1. If you could review it, that would be most appreciated. The chapter is intended to be incredibly short, I debated on whether to call it a prologue or chapter 1, but I hate prologues, so I just called it chapter 1.

Thanks,
Militia

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Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:11 pm

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Blues says...

I'll get to them as soon as I can then!