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Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:15 pm
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Blues says...



Need a review? You've come to the right place!

Here at Blues' Fiction reviews, we review:

- Short Stories, any genre
- Novels, any genre - (Unless I've read previous chapters, please don't post chapters in the middle of the story)
- Some Fanfiction (please enquire)
- Photography.

We aim to complete reviews by the weekend.

Request away!

Blues.
Last edited by Blues on Sat Mar 16, 2013 8:54 pm, edited 21 times in total.





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Tue Aug 30, 2011 3:57 pm
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Twit says...



I have a short story called Gold and Silver that very muchly needs reviews. :)
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Thu Sep 01, 2011 8:17 pm
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Blues says...



Reviewed! :) This morning anyway.

So... who's next? :)





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Thu Sep 01, 2011 8:23 pm
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Roza says...



I have an Alice's Adventures in Wonderland horror parody that I'd like to get some words on if you'd be so kind :)

topic86978.html

I realised I'd posted in the wrong section so here it is in the Fiction Fantasy section

topic86995.html
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Thu Sep 01, 2011 8:26 pm
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Blues says...



I'm on it! :D

--EDIT--
Done! :) I think I should add for anyone who requests for a review that they're welcome to PM me about any questions about my reviews/writing in general if they want to :)





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Thu Oct 27, 2011 8:53 pm
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Daisuki says...



Hello dere!
If you'd like to take a peek at these and choose the one you'd like to review, I'd be very grateful!
viewtopic.php?t=88663
or
topic89554.html
Thanks so much,
Dai
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Fri Oct 28, 2011 8:36 am
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polinkacreations says...



'Ello there. Do you do novels, sir?
It's fantasy, and it's only 4 chapters (so far) - I would love your opinion.
novel.php?id=1934
Thank you in advance!
(As I've asked for a novel review, I could do one for you as payment:)
xxx
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Fri Oct 28, 2011 2:03 pm
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I reviewed yours, Daisuki! It was brilliant :)

Polinka, I'm on yours soon. [Yup, I do novels] I'll do it as soon as I can. NaNoWriMo's making me all stressed XD You could review thisbut no obligation. I'm not sure if it's your thing anyway :)





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Sun Nov 06, 2011 10:23 am
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Sins says...



Heya, Ahmadblues!

When you find the time, could you please check out a prologue for me? topic89882.html

Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:29 am
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Blues says...



Polinka - I did Chapter 1 and 2, I'll be moving on to the next soon :)

Skins, I reviewed your prologue :) Thank you! XD

Feel free to spam me with review requests, everyone XD





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Sun Nov 06, 2011 3:28 pm
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Winchester says...



Hey!
Could you please review This for me?
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 7:58 am
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polinkacreations says...



Hey:) You've been giving great reviews on my novel, and thank you so much for that!
Two new ones have been posted (if you care to take a look).
topic90493.html
topic90491.html

Thanks so much in advance! :)
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Mon Nov 21, 2011 9:47 am
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Blues says...



Sure! I'll do them as soon as possible :)
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Tue Nov 29, 2011 3:52 pm
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Benrobertringrose says...



Hi Ahmad!

Iv'e entered this piece into a competition, I can still edit it and would love some feedback just in case there is anything I can
do to improve it. Many thanks Ben

post938407.html#p938407








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