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Sun Oct 07, 2012 8:31 am
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I really should have checked my WRFF much earlier. xD I'll try and get them all done today!

Done so far:

Skins (I'll review the next chapters after I finish these requests :D )
Last edited by Blues on Sun Oct 07, 2012 9:52 am, edited 1 time in total.





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Sun Oct 07, 2012 8:51 am
Nerosns says...



Thanks and enjoy! :D





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Sat Dec 08, 2012 7:02 pm
Clarity says...



work.php?id=98178 this please, and if you get the time, I'd just like a little feedback on this please: work.php?id=98150
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Sat Dec 08, 2012 11:49 pm
VampireSenshi says...



When you have the time :D

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Mon Dec 10, 2012 2:30 am
DevanEWilliams says...



Hai, Blues! If you could review this it'd be much appreciated! :)

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Mon Dec 10, 2012 8:15 pm
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Oh wow. It's been forever since I remembered this and since I reviewed. You guys will be my guinea pigs while I try and remember how to review. Like the oil on a rusty machine. :twisted:





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Sun Dec 16, 2012 6:01 am
ShakespeareWallah says...



Hey Blues,

CAN you review this for me please.

Thanks.





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Sun Dec 16, 2012 12:07 pm
Lycando says...



Blues if could review this it would be great!

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Thanks much! :)
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Mon Dec 17, 2012 6:52 pm
Clarity says...



work.php?id=98362 :D
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Mon Dec 17, 2012 7:15 pm
Blues says...



Hey all! I have a lot of school work at the moment so I might take slower than usual to finish the reviews. I intend to have them done by this week though ^^





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Fri Dec 21, 2012 4:56 pm
polinkacreations says...



Hellow:) I sincerely hope I won't be putting too much work on you if I request this to be read: work.php?id=98441#c341175
Thanks so much! (if there's anything that needs to be reviewed, ask!)
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Sun Dec 30, 2012 1:30 pm
Blues says...



Done! :) Who's next?

(Polinka, I reviewed chapter two and I'm off to review the rest :D)





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Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:13 pm
MagnusBane says...



I posted this a few months ago, but I'm just starting to revise it now. If you have the time to review it, I'd really appreciate it!

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Tue Jan 08, 2013 8:10 pm
Blues says...



Done! (A few days ago though)





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Wed Jan 09, 2013 1:45 am
Twit says...



Hi Blues!

This is an extract, so it's ok if you'd rather not review it, but my concerns are about the effectiveness of this one scene, and it shouldn't matter too much that you've not read the rest. But if it does, then that's cool. :)

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