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Fri Dec 30, 2011 11:45 pm
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Taxi says...



I have a request for ya...

viewtopic.php?f=361&t=91662

Thank you in advance. ^_^





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Sun Jan 01, 2012 1:33 pm
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mattimias says...



I have a request for you... Thanks in advance!

viewtopic.php?f=16&t=89115
I am... RealmStrike. Fear me.





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Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:44 pm
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Blues says...



Wow! I've got lots of requests :D

Bear with me, everyone. I can get to them all, but it'll take a few days to get to, until I can catch up.

Keep 'em coming though! :D





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Sun Jan 01, 2012 2:59 pm
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kasimkaey says...



Hey Ahmad,

Just go ahead and check mine out (-8 it's part of a novel that I'm working on so feel free to leave a review on the other chapters as well ;)

viewtopic.php?f=16&t=90484&p=936123#p936123

and

viewtopic.php?f=361&t=90617&p=936957#p936957





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Sun Jan 01, 2012 4:39 pm
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Blues says...



So, Blue, Alfonso, I've done yours and UpAndOut, the first chapter. Cool.

I'll get to the others later today or tomorrow! :)





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Sun Jan 15, 2012 3:58 am
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Dragongirl says...



Hey Blue,

If you have time could you maybe check out the first chapter to my novel CinderAllen?

Here is a link. viewtopic.php?f=363&t=90883

Thank you so much!

~DG
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller

~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
- Bill Cosby





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Sun Jan 15, 2012 6:00 am
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AllessandreP says...



The work I'd like reviewed is my debut on my new profile:
viewtopic.php?f=361&t=92645
Its a fantasy, and it's called Elemental Lands: Intro
Thanks for your time!
Allessandre P
I was on here as Allessandre, but I changed my email and forgot about this site for a while. By the time I came back, I'd forgtten my password. My old account
memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=15926





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Mon Jan 16, 2012 9:04 pm
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ShootingStars says...



Hey! This is Shooting Stars!
Here's the links to some of my works: (you seriously don't have to do ALL of them :D)

Glory on the Court, Short Story- viewtopic.php?f=6&t=92618

Hate List, Pilot for a Novel-http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=365&t=92610

Waiting in the Dark, Short Story-http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92670

Creativity, Really Short Story-http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92591

Wow! Thank you so much! Like I said, you don't have to read all of these!
---Shooting Stars
When you wish upon a star, makes no difference who you are. Anything your heart desires will come to you. -Jiminy Cricket

Don't be afraid to jump, to leap, to fly too far and don't be scared to touch the stars!





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Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:22 am
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noninjaes says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=361&t=92079
^ This please.
Thanks in advance.
Noni Naps Through Nano
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Being awesome since Jan 2012.





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Wed Jan 18, 2012 3:15 pm
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Winchester says...



Hey Ahmad :)

Could you review this for me?

viewtopic.php?f=359&t=92756
"Winner, winner, chicken dinner" Wise words said by the one and only, Dean Winchester.





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Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:34 pm
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Blues says...



Okay! I shall get to these as soon as possible. I'll just write down a quick list of everything and cross off as I go:

ShootingStars 18/01/12
Ninja 19/01/12
Redvine

Added: Jas
Scarlett
Last edited by Blues on Thu Jan 19, 2012 10:30 pm, edited 2 times in total.





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Wed Jan 18, 2012 9:15 pm
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Jas says...



viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92719&p=952687#p952687

Review please. :D Whenever you have the time though. I feel like such a jerk, you've given me such great reviews and I have never given you one. I shall tonight. And if I don't, I'll do two tomorrow and if I don't do two tomorrow, I'll do three Friday. And so forth.

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I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~





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Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:00 pm
Blues says...



xD I saw that PM! I said I'd get to it but then I got review requests, so funny how it came here anyway xD I've added it to my list!

Oh, thanks Jas! Feel free to review whatever you want. I've got nothing embarrassing on here.... yet. xD








Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins