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Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:38 pm
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emilybrodo says...



Can you review this? My friend is a little blue since she's had no reviews, and when she reposted it yesterday i decided to secretly help her out ha ha.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93795
She's worked really hard on her novel and I think it would be a really good confidence boost if you and other people positively review it. And please like it too, when I get likes I feel awesome.
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Sun Mar 04, 2012 10:39 pm
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emilybrodo says...



Oh man! You made me lose the game! 'burst out crying' ha ha
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Sun Mar 04, 2012 11:40 pm
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Blues says...



xD

I'll have it done by tomorrow night!

Edit: Done!
Last edited by Blues on Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:40 pm, edited 1 time in total.





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Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:14 am
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DevanEWilliams says...



Hey, this is a story that's been up for quite a while, but more opinions would be greatly appreciated since it only got 1 1/2 ish reviews :P
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=91104
I know it's long, so take your time! Thank you!
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Sat Mar 10, 2012 2:55 pm
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Winchester says...



Hey Ahmad - Promise to forgive you for making me lost the game if you rip this thing to shreds for me :')
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=93915
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Sat Mar 10, 2012 9:21 pm
Blues says...



Hahahaha, you just lost the game by THINKING about how I made you lose the game.

I like my signature.

Anyway, I shall get to those two as soon as possible - Monday if not Sunday? Depends how my day turns out :)





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Sun Mar 18, 2012 8:04 pm
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Sins says...



Heya, Ahmad! :)

I'm going to be a pain in the butt and ask you for a review on a random chapter that I've recently added into a finished novel of mine. The concept of the chapter's pretty simple though and the chapter's from the beginning of the book, so it should be fairly easy to understand. I'd really appreciate it if you took a look at it!

Before I start rambling, here's the link: work.php?id=94023

Take your time and thanks a bundle!
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Tue Mar 20, 2012 9:28 am
Blues says...



Red, Done!

Devan, Skins, I shall get to those soon. Thanks for requesting!





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Wed Mar 21, 2012 12:11 am
TheSunChildren says...



Hey, i hope you don't mind, but if you get the time would you mind reviewing the first third of my first chapter for me? i had to take 2/3 out so it didn't look as long but i'll put it back in if it's deemed good enough, you may also notice that its mostly descriptive because i have to set the scene for so much background, but it does slowly narrow in on the plot.
i'm just really axious to see what someone other than friends and family thinks, and be as critical as you like as i need to get this perfect :?
work.php?id=94222
thanks in advance
Last edited by TheSunChildren on Sun Mar 25, 2012 9:07 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sun Mar 25, 2012 7:46 pm
Blues says...



Devan, completed!

I'll definitely get to the rest. My internet is terrible at the moment, but I'll try to get to it as soon as possible. I'll get to it when it's not being nasty.

:)





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Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:41 pm
Blues says...



Skins, done!





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Sat May 12, 2012 12:01 pm
Blues says...



Back from holiday and have been for a while. BFR inc. is open again!





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Sun May 13, 2012 6:27 am
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oNegativeZero says...



Hi Blues, could you review my short story Discord Gear? Thanks.





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Sun May 13, 2012 7:16 pm
TheAceofAll says...



Hey i have started to write a novel called Welcome To Orba Nova and was looking for a review. My first chapter needs work due to it kinda sucks but it picks up fast so could u please review.
work.php?id=95067
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Fri May 18, 2012 10:50 pm
DudeMcGuy says...



Hello Blues,

Mind taking a shot at this one when you have the time?
work.php?id=95342
Fantasy story. I've been working on this one on and off for the last month or so. This link is to the revised version of the prologue that no one has read yet. (when I wrote this anyway)
I'm looking for additional reviews so I can just keep on improving :).
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