Oh wow. It's been forever since I remembered this and since I reviewed. You guys will be my guinea pigs while I try and remember how to review. Like the oil on a rusty machine.
Insert certain quote here from some terribly famous and renowned great scientist/philosopher/actor who is now dead and so his/her words shall carry on -Lycando
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Hey all! I have a lot of school work at the moment so I might take slower than usual to finish the reviews. I intend to have them done by this week though ^^
Hellow:) I sincerely hope I won't be putting too much work on you if I request this to be read: work.php?id=98441#c341175 Thanks so much! (if there's anything that needs to be reviewed, ask!)
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss
This is an extract, so it's ok if you'd rather not review it, but my concerns are about the effectiveness of this one scene, and it shouldn't matter too much that you've not read the rest. But if it does, then that's cool.
I wondered why we put villains in our stories when we have plenty of them in real life; then I realized that maybe we wanted stories where the good guy wins. — nogutsnoglory
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