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14 Reviews

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Thu Oct 13, 2011 5:26 pm
espeon says...


Thank you, kind sir!

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146 Reviews

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Sat Oct 15, 2011 4:58 pm
Dragongirl says...

Hey, could you review the first chapter of my novel Hook for me?
Thanks a billion!
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33 Reviews

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Sat Oct 15, 2011 6:26 pm
S.S. Rose says...

Aw, crumbs. Wish you'd review poetry. :/
"Hand in hand, the letters cross the room, whirl around the bed, sweep past the window, wriggle across the wall, swoop to the door, and return to begin again."

~Jean-Dominique Bauby

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152 Reviews

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Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:54 pm
Mikko says...

I wrote this a long time ago, but I still want to know what you think!
Tear it up!


Thank you!
when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams

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25 Reviews

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Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:28 pm
JasperSkye says...

i would really appreciate a review on the first chapter of my short story "Trouble, My Favorite" ..

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280 Reviews


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Fri Oct 28, 2011 5:48 pm
joshuapaul says...

Whats the link Jasper?
Read my latest

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Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:20 am
wardemon42 says...

Can you review my novel's summary?

Ok. Imagine. In the REGION of Gaurdania myhtical creatures live. If a human gets in the area captured and put in a camp to be memory erased of Gaurdania.The main characters are G'wendelon and G'rockle(any new names?) G'rockle is male and G'wendelon is female. G'rockle is a kitronus so he can see and destroy drascothians and he is also a prince.(son of Nogard his dad/king) G'wendelon isn't no princess or kitronus but she can charm you or use spells (a mage) they are all dragons(Nogard G'rockle amd G'wendelon) G'rockle has been sneaking off from his royal throne to build stuff with his welder's breath because he can't fully breathe fire.Then he goeas on a massive quest thorughout Gaurdania fighting beasts side by side with G'wendelon and any new friends to save the crystal of life from Tnepres,Bane,and Milotinous.If thety fail life will end as they know it.( I'm making this a book too)

If you have any questions on what they are just ask i have a notebook with three pages of notes

P.S. I made up the creatures and names and abilities

p.s.s. I am using bane G'wendelon and G'rockle till new ideas
The Tale of Me

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553 Reviews

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Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:55 pm
MiaParamore says...

Hey, Josh. I've seen your work around and would really love to get a review on this?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore

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71 Reviews

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Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:53 pm
Gheala says...

I need your help. This except is in a great need of a review >.> It's from my crime/romance novel

Thanks a lot!
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