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Will Review For Food
Thu Oct 13, 2011 5:26 pm
Thank you, kind sir!
Sat Oct 15, 2011 4:58 pm
Hey, could you review the first chapter of my novel Hook for me?
Thanks a billion!
"Every writer I know has trouble writing." - Joseph Heller
~ A word to the wise ain't necessary, it's the stupid ones who need advice.~
- Bill Cosby
Sat Oct 15, 2011 6:26 pm
Aw, crumbs. Wish you'd review poetry. :/
"Hand in hand, the letters cross the room, whirl around the bed, sweep past the window, wriggle across the wall, swoop to the door, and return to begin again."
Sun Oct 16, 2011 9:54 pm
I wrote this a long time ago, but I still want to know what you think!
Tear it up!
when she needs to shelter from reality she takes a dip in my daydreams
Thu Oct 27, 2011 3:28 pm
i would really appreciate a review on the first chapter of my short story "Trouble, My Favorite" ..
Fri Oct 28, 2011 5:48 pm
Whats the link Jasper?
Sun Oct 30, 2011 3:20 am
Can you review my novel's summary?
Ok. Imagine. In the REGION of Gaurdania myhtical creatures live. If a human gets in the area captured and put in a camp to be memory erased of Gaurdania.The main characters are G'wendelon and G'rockle(any new names?) G'rockle is male and G'wendelon is female. G'rockle is a kitronus so he can see and destroy drascothians and he is also a prince.(son of Nogard his dad/king) G'wendelon isn't no princess or kitronus but she can charm you or use spells (a mage) they are all dragons(Nogard G'rockle amd G'wendelon) G'rockle has been sneaking off from his royal throne to build stuff with his welder's breath because he can't fully breathe fire.Then he goeas on a massive quest thorughout Gaurdania fighting beasts side by side with G'wendelon and any new friends to save the crystal of life from Tnepres,Bane,and Milotinous.If thety fail life will end as they know it.( I'm making this a book too)
If you have any questions on what they are just ask i have a notebook with three pages of notes
P.S. I made up the creatures and names and abilities
p.s.s. I am using bane G'wendelon and G'rockle till new ideas
The Tale of Me
Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:55 pm
Hey, Josh. I've seen your work around and would really love to get a review on
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"
Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:53 pm
I need your help. This except is in a great need of a review >.> It's from my crime/romance novel
Thanks a lot!
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In case this made no sense, I'm just saying that I'm happy I'm back!
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— Dean Winchester
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