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Wed May 04, 2011 12:58 am
Glauke says...



Mmm, yes, how about a small Diet Coke, no ice, a double cheeseburger, hold the lettuce. And, from the dollar menu, I'll have ONE BIG FAT TASTY REVIEW. Yeah, second window? Okay, cool.


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My name is PenPrincess, and I have been on YWS for almost a year now. Although my review count may tell you otherwise, I am actually quite an experienced reviewer. I offer writing tutoring at my school, and I am a member of Teen Ink and Word Press. I am also on Fan Fiction, but of all of these sites, YWS is by far my favorite.

Novels:
I can be a novel follower!
I will be a novel follower if you'd like. This means that I will review each new chapter as it is posted. If you want me to be a novel follower, and already have more than three chapters posted, it will cost 50 points for me to review all the chapters. There will be no more fees beyond that.

Songfics and Fan Fictions:
Hmm... this is hard to explain. Songfics are easier, because it is so much easier to listen to a song than read an entire novel/chapter book/series. If you are doing a Fanfiction work of a story that is longer than 100 pages, I can't review it. Sorry!

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behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  





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Wed May 04, 2011 2:15 am
Jas says...



Can I please have s hot, delicious review of this: topic80222.html

It's a short story called Winterland. If you like it, press the like button please! Thanks!

~Jas
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Wed May 04, 2011 7:17 am
Eniarrol says...



Cool sounds good :) Once I work on and get some more chapters of my novel up I'll come your way <3
A hero isn’t defined by winning. Loads of heroes die in the effort. Most of them never get any recognition. No, a hero is just somebody who does the right thing when it would be far, far easier to do nothing.


~Previously SweetMoments
  





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Wed May 04, 2011 11:56 am
Glauke says...



Jas, review is posted, please pull up to the second window. And SweetMoments, I'll be expecting you! :3 :D
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Wed May 04, 2011 11:03 pm
PhoenixRain says...



I'd be much obliged if you'd review mine :) post857370.html#p857370
NaPoWriMo Count: 6 poems (only started on the 14th :P)
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Thu May 05, 2011 1:26 pm
Eniarrol says...



Well its not my novel but a short story instead :)
Huzzah! topic80459.html
A hero isn’t defined by winning. Loads of heroes die in the effort. Most of them never get any recognition. No, a hero is just somebody who does the right thing when it would be far, far easier to do nothing.


~Previously SweetMoments
  





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Fri May 06, 2011 1:02 am
Glauke says...



SweetMoments and PhoenixRain, reviews are posted! :D
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behind the clouds is the sun still shining
  








Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
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