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Mon May 02, 2011 6:44 am
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Lavvie says...



Done, Ctrl.

Any more?
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Tue May 03, 2011 6:27 am
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Lavvie says...



Reviews wanted! *hinthintnudgenudgewinkwink*
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Fri May 06, 2011 4:13 am
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Jas says...



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Hai! Can I get a review on this please? Thanks! :D

If you like it, press like! :D
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Sun May 08, 2011 6:09 pm
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Boolovesyou says...



Hey! Boo again! ( I hope you missed me.) I wrote two poems recently. They are both pretty short so they shouldn't take up a lot of time! If you could review them it would be great!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=80590
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=80591


- Boo
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Sun May 08, 2011 11:27 pm
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I'll get to those as soon as possible, Boo! Glad you came back.

Jas? I'm finding it rather challenging to review something so short and it already has loads of reviewed, making it doubly hard. I apologize, but I can't find much to say about it because already people have targeted most of the issues with Winterland. If you would like a different review by me, go right ahead :)
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Mon May 09, 2011 7:30 pm
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LittlePrincess says...



Review would be greatly appreciated: topic80611.html

And I'd be happy to do one in return :) Just let me know by PM or on my wall or just attach it to the end of your comment.
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Sat May 14, 2011 3:38 pm
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sarebear says...



Hi Lavender,

If you decide you're okay with reviewing it, here's the link to the first chapter of my book! post859926.html#p859926

Thanks
Sare
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Sat May 14, 2011 5:46 pm
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Lavvie says...



Hi all.

So I'm being rather slow on the reviews. The school week was extremely busy so I couldn't do much.

Boo- both your requested poems are finished.
LittlePrincess- I'll get to that right after I post this.
Sarebear- I'll try and do that review today if not tomorrow or next weekend.
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Sat May 14, 2011 9:06 pm
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Lavvie says...



Done, LittlePrincess.
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Mon May 16, 2011 11:01 pm
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Lavvie says...



Note to self: topic80968.html
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Fri May 20, 2011 7:45 am
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Please review my story....I think the link is in my signature...somewhere...

found IT!!
*Goes away fuming and complaining why aren't there lampshades and leaves a card on the floor that has his signature on it*
Spoiler! :
The time it takes for you to finish reading this is the exact same amount of time you just wasted in reading this horrible joke.

I am not one to say but you are still wasting your time here :P
  





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Sat May 21, 2011 3:03 am
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Camulaeus says...



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I need some feedback Please :3
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Sat May 21, 2011 9:42 pm
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Lavvie says...



Sorry for the wait, Sarebear, but your review is done.

beckiw's will be done soon.

Rite- I'll get to that after beckiw's. I'll review only the first chapter and you can have me review the others later if you insist.

Cammy- Hopefully today and if not, tomorrow :)

Sorry for the waits!
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Sat May 21, 2011 10:14 pm
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Lavvie says...



Beaks-- done.

Ritehunter-- done.
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Tue Aug 16, 2011 6:16 am
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Lavvie says...



Bumping. I need to do some more reviews!
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