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Tue Apr 05, 2011 3:48 am
Alz says...



Hey everyone,

I am willing to do some reviews! I'll try to get through as many as I can, but please do not post more than two items at a time, and avoid posting anything that is overly depressing. I don't have time to review entire novels right now, but if you have one or two specific chapters you would like critiqued, fire away. Also, I will not review anything over 16+.

Likes (I will definitely review these, though I may be persuaded to review other things, if you ask nicely): Poetry (all types), Fantasy, Historical Fiction, General Fiction
Dislikes (hint: I will NOT review these): Fanfiction, Scripts
*Please include a link when posting! Thanks!

-Alz
The beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. - Robert Cormier

Check out my blog at http://missalliesadventures.blogspot.com
  





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Thu Apr 21, 2011 1:20 am
theotherone says...



Hello Alz :)

So, this is a poem I posted a while ago, and everyone told me to write a little more. So I did, but nobody gave me feed back on the edited part. So here you go, it's in your hands. :)

viewtopic.php?t=76927

Thanks in advance!

-Other One
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:07 am
Alz says...



I would be glad to review your poem! I will try to get it done some time this weekend. :)
The beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. - Robert Cormier

Check out my blog at http://missalliesadventures.blogspot.com
  





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Sat Apr 23, 2011 2:00 am
Flower~Child says...



Will you review my poem? post850763.html#p850763
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.

  





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Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:18 pm
UnicornNerd says...



Please review My novel, the Shift!! Kthnxbai!!!!!
  





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Tue Apr 26, 2011 12:26 am
Alz says...



theotherone - Your review is finished. I hope it was helpful, but if anything was unclear, feel free to ask me!

Flower~Child - I will put your poem on my list of things to review, and will try to get it done soon.

UnicornNerd - At this point, I don't have enough time to commit to reviewing an entire novel, but if you have a chapter or two that you would like reviewed, let me know which ones.


Keep the review requests coming!
Alz
The beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. - Robert Cormier

Check out my blog at http://missalliesadventures.blogspot.com
  





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Fri May 06, 2011 11:36 pm
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Any other requests?
The beautiful part of writing is that you don't have to get it right the first time, unlike, say, a brain surgeon. - Robert Cormier

Check out my blog at http://missalliesadventures.blogspot.com
  





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Fri May 06, 2011 11:48 pm
Jas says...



topic80222.html

Could I please get a review on this? Thanks!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Sun May 08, 2011 5:53 pm
Boolovesyou says...



Hey! I wrote two poems recently. They are both pretty short so they shouldn't take up a lot of time! If you could review them it would be great!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=80590
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=80591

- Boo
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