Young Writers Society

Hey guys and girls, it's me, Psudiname. As you now know if you read the title, I am officially a private reviewer. Here are the rules.

What I will review: action/adventure, sci-fi, fantasy, historical fiction, general fiction, and if you ask nicely, romance.

What I won't review: fan-fic, poetry, lyrics, nonfiction, and advanced critiques.

what I charge: ABSOLUTELY NOTHING!!!

my rule with novels: I will review the first three chapters, and if I like it, (which I usually do) I will review any other chapters after that.

please post the links below, as there is no way you are getting me to fish through your portfolios.

Alright, I'll start this off for you! Will you review this poetry for me!
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic78468.html

Hey! I'd very much appreciate it if you could review my novel, Anything But Normal. I only have the first two chapters up (the first chapter is in two parts), so you can review as much as you like. I'm mostly looking for opinions on dialogue, character development, and the plot pace. This is my first draft so it has quite a lot of imperfections that I need to fix when I start my second draft, so any opinions would be helpful! Thanks so much! :D

Rachael

Hello, Psudiname! I have a novel, and I need motivation to continue with it. I could use some feedback and some constructive criticism. Here is the link: novel.php?id=1118

Thank you in advance!

Hi! I would really appreciate it if you reviewed this --> post841635.html#p841635
It's in other so I dont know... You didnt say much about that XD

I'd love to see you fishing in my portfolio -it's a coral reef in there but, ho, hum, I've given you the link now.

~Tinkem

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