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Wed Mar 23, 2011 5:59 am
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xxSmileyBubblesxx says...



Whee! Mind critiquing this? topic78024.html

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Thu Mar 24, 2011 2:35 am
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Dreamwalker says...



And I'm done. Anymore reviews needed, anyone? :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Fri Mar 25, 2011 9:49 pm
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Camulaeus says...



Yup viewtopic.php?t=77877 Please!
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Sat Mar 26, 2011 6:33 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



Sure thing, Cam :)
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sat Mar 26, 2011 7:09 pm
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And I'm done! On to the next one! *cough* whenever is should be requested *cough*
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Wed Mar 30, 2011 9:18 pm
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So far... no requests in awhile. How depressing!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:43 pm
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rayhutch5 says...



I'm here to get you out of your depression. ;) A review on my novel, Anything But Normal would be very much appreciated. It's fantasy, so I hope you enjoy that genre! Warning: It's a first draft so it's, well rough, obviously. Any critiques will definitely help me out when I come back and start the second draft! Thanks so much! :D

Rachael
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 3:59 am
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Dreamwalker says...



All three chapters of 'Anything but Normal' are finished.

I'll do up supersquirrels tomorrow as its really late and I need to sleep xD.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sat Apr 02, 2011 2:41 pm
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And supersquirrel's is done! Now its the waiting game again xD.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:26 pm
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tinkembell says...



Hi!
I'd really appreciate it if you could review this viewtopic.php?t=78580 for me XD
thanks a lot, *gives you a cookie*
~Tinkem
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;'( please, my lump, he just needs HUGS <3
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Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:34 pm
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Lava says...



Hey Dream!

So, I would appreciate if you could take a look at our Poetry Pairs entry.

Thanks a ton!
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Sun Apr 03, 2011 6:41 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



Yep, I'm on it, Lava!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Wed Apr 06, 2011 2:49 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



Any review requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Wed Apr 06, 2011 4:33 pm
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pterascreams says...



Would you mind reviewing a preview of a Science Fiction Novel I'm working on?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=76799
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