Hi Dreamwalker! Would you be willing to review this piece for me? It's a different style of poetry for me, sorta two poems in one. It is entitled "Opportunities." Thanks!
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Hey, Walker! Because I'm a pain in the butt, could you check out my latest novel for me, please? There are three chapters posted so far, but you can read/review as much or as little as you want.
I understand that it's irritating to jump into a novel after it's gotten started, but, well...the reviewers who were helping me went back to school. Dratted school. I've been left for a month without a review on Ch. 5. work.php?id=97541
If you could please review this for me, I'd be willing to beg.
Thanks!
~Shady
"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus "From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf "A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni [they/he]
Realistic Fiction short story request~ Would love a nitpicky review to this. I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you so much
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"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself. — LadyMysterio
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