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Mon May 28, 2012 12:00 am
HostofHorus says...



Hi Dreamwalker! :) Would you be willing to review this piece for me? It's a different style of poetry for me, sorta two poems in one. It is entitled "Opportunities." Thanks!

work.php?id=94750
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
http://JRSStories.com
Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014

Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Sun Sep 30, 2012 5:41 pm
Dreamwalker says...



Reopened and ready for business.

Ask me and I'll be there. Scouts honour.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sun Sep 30, 2012 8:56 pm
Sins says...



Hey, Walker! Because I'm a pain in the butt, could you check out my latest novel for me, please? There are three chapters posted so far, but you can read/review as much or as little as you want.

Here's chapter one: work.php?id=97263

You can get to the others via that if you fancy having a look. Please and thank you!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Mon Oct 29, 2012 2:56 am
Shady says...



Hey Walker!

I understand that it's irritating to jump into a novel after it's gotten started, but, well...the reviewers who were helping me went back to school. Dratted school. I've been left for a month without a review on Ch. 5. work.php?id=97541

If you could please review this for me, I'd be willing to beg. :smt089

Thanks! :smt003

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Sat Nov 17, 2012 8:58 pm
Sassafras says...



work.php?id=97971

Please?
A pale imitator of a girl in the sky.
  





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Mon Nov 19, 2012 4:59 pm
indieeloise says...



Realistic Fiction short story request~ Would love a nitpicky review to this. I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you so much :)

work.php?id=97881
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco
  





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Wed Nov 21, 2012 6:46 pm
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Lumi says...



i'll pay you with :3s and <3s
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


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Sun Dec 23, 2012 5:34 am
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Kafkaescence says...



work.php?id=98364

I'll keep you posted regarding further chapters.
#TNT

WRFF
  





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Sun Dec 23, 2012 6:09 pm
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CinnaThePoet says...



Could you please check this out?

work.php?id=98487

It's really not the best thing I've ever written. I'm getting back into poetry after a very long hiatus.
-Alex
  





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Wed Dec 26, 2012 1:47 am
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Dreamwalker says...



Pretty much caught up. Anymore requests?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Thu Dec 27, 2012 8:33 am
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silented1 says...



work.php?id=98468

I'll hit you back with one on poetry, if you'd like.
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

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Fri Dec 28, 2012 4:46 pm
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Dreamwalker says...



All done!

Anymore requests, my dears?
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  





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Sat Dec 29, 2012 7:03 am
ImHero says...



Hey, Please review this work.php?id=98329

If you can, or can't thanks anyway :)
new profile: profile.php?u=36729
  





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Sun Dec 30, 2012 7:54 pm
Dreamwalker says...



Done and done.

Keep requesting, lovelies.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  








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