Young Writers Society

No, you don't really have to beg.... But it might make me smile if you did??! Tehe! Anywho....

Hello! !t is me, the human host of Horus! I am here to give you a God's review of your work. So scroll through the item's I will review below, and let me know!

Poetry:

I will review any poetry under 15 stanzas. Sorry... I'm not a gigantic fan of long poems.... They actually kind of make me angry, or make me cry, like my avatar. Or like my avatar used to.... Now you'll just make my all seeing Eye of Horus cry...

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I love poetry though and you can plan on me giving some good reviews. These are my favorite to review. So bring them on!


Short Stories:

Any short stories under a 5000 words. Sorry, but I don't think I can review the novels in the way you would like me too. Nor would I be able to do them in a timely fashion... SO short stories all the way.

How I review:

I will review by the following.

-State the comments and other generals stuffs in this boring black color.
-Make corrections in this blood looking color because everyone notices blood.
-Give suggestions In this pretty purple color because purple always feels left out.... And I feel bad for it, so I am giving it a chance to be used a lot!
-Explain the things I like in this sort of maroon color because maroon is amazing.
-Give you my overall thoughts at the end in some random color if I feel like it.... (The color part I mean....)

If you want to see some of my reviews here are a few links, they are pretty much all of poems though.... Also realize I will focus on any particular aspect providing you specify it when asking (or hopefully begging) for a review.

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Now why am I doing this...? Well because I want to get some of those perty little badges, and I have always believed that reading others work helps one improve! So, get down and beg!

Hehe... Seriously, no one?

This isn't a short story, but it's just the first chapter of something longer, and you don't have to review the rest at all... It's not on the forums anyways, so you can't, lol. Only you don't have much going on here, so I thought I'd ask.

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If it goes against your reviewing principles, then just ignore it and me, lol.

Complete!

Hey there! I was wondering if I could request a review

Part One: viewtopic.php?t=77182

Part Two: viewtopic.php?t=77524


Thanks sooo much!

Finished part one, I'll try and hit part two tonight.

Finished!

Anymore?!

YES! Please, please, please review this poem for mee?
Please?
Amen.

Not sure if that's the begging you were looking for.
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Oh yeah, I finished that a while ago =P

Anyone?!? Come on, bring it on!

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It be a poem. THANKS!

Done

Still available for assistance...

Okay, Can i ask for a review. The story is generally R18 for graphic violence. If you don't mind:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic78650.html

Can I ask you to look at the story and telling how well the structure, style is, and the characters.
I have a bad reputation for grammar. Its my second language so I know that there are grammar problems here but can i ask you to focus more on the context of the story and check if it is well written.

Thanks