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Tue Oct 11, 2011 2:07 am
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kendallelise says...



hello! I've been looking through the forums and your reviews are popping up everywhere! :) I would love love love if you could possibly critique my poem? :) I'm new to YWS, but am having so much fun, already! I've always enjoyed writing poetry/short stories, but now I have a place to become a better writer and improve my prose. I'd adore some good feedback!!! :)

this is it

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Tue Oct 11, 2011 9:16 pm
theotherone says...



Hey Kendallelise :) Your review is done. Next review?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Wed Oct 12, 2011 12:17 am
DevanEWilliams says...



I would really appreciate a review on my poem:
viewtopic.php?t=88119
Thanks so much!
~Devan
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And always have extra marshmallows on hand in case of emergencies.

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Mon Oct 24, 2011 9:09 pm
theotherone says...



Your review is done, Devan. :)

Anyone else?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Fri Nov 04, 2011 1:19 pm
polinkacreations says...



Hey there! *high five*
Could you review my poem, please? It's not long, but I would like an opinion. Thanks!
viewtopic.php?t=89852
:smt016:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind." - Dr. Seuss
  





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Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:38 pm
theotherone says...



Hello Polinkacreations, your review is done, hope it helps! :)

Is anyone up for a review from me?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Wed Dec 14, 2011 10:22 pm
AlfonsoFernandez says...



Could you review what I have done so far of my novel? It's fantasy, just for you to know. Chapter one is found here. Chapter two is here. Thank you! =D
"True glory consists in doing what deserves to be written; in writing what deserves to be read."
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Sat Jan 07, 2012 7:21 pm
theotherone says...



Alphonso Fernandez, your review is done. :) Sorry it took me so much time. Anyone else up for a review?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Tue Jan 10, 2012 11:46 pm
WrittenInStone says...



I wouldn't mind a review on my piece as well, please?
Voil'a monsieur theotherone (if you are female don't take offence, I say this all the time..)

> A poem please : http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopi ... 17&t=92055
To fly away on gossamer wings, sheer as night's reflective glow, I would could I cradle child hecate to my breast.

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Wed Jan 11, 2012 1:41 am
theotherone says...



Written In Stone, it's done! So... Will someone ask for another review? :)
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Wed Jan 11, 2012 7:57 pm
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Benrobertringrose says...



Hello,

Would love a review on this if possible,

viewtopic.php?f=6&t=92344

Thanks, much appreciated! :)
  








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