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Wed Mar 23, 2011 11:02 pm
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theotherone says...



Smiley! Review is done as well. :) Who's next?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Fri Mar 25, 2011 1:55 am
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theotherone says...



Mean Mr. Mustard: your beautiful poem is reviewed! Any other brave souls?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Thu Apr 07, 2011 2:09 pm
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medievalwriter says...



topic78209.html

Could you pleeease have a look at this? It would be very much appreciated :)
Hwær cwom mearg? Hwær cwom mago?
Hwær cwom maþþumgyfa?
Hwær cwom symbla gesetu?
Hwær sindon seledreamas?
  





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Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:19 am
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theotherone says...



Medieval Writer, your review it done as well!

Somebody else interested?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Fri Apr 15, 2011 2:06 am
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Daisuki says...



Oooh... I desperately want a review, yet at the same time I don't know if I do... Oh well, I'll just suck it up. Could you please review this:
http://youngwriterssociety.com/topic79337.html
Don't be afraid to be harsh. I can take it.
Thank you very much, I really appreciate it!
-Dai
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Sat Apr 16, 2011 6:23 pm
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theotherone says...



Dai, your review is done!

Do I have anyone else?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Sat Apr 16, 2011 6:43 pm
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bubblegum says...



You could review the first part of my novel? It's fantasy, but the fantasy part hasn't started yet, so.. Thank you.

post848590.html#p848590
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Sat Apr 16, 2011 7:43 pm
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theotherone says...



Hello Bubble, you're review is completed, thanks for asking! :)

Anyone else wants to give me some work? I'm in the mood. ;)
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Sat Apr 16, 2011 8:54 pm
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GeeLyria says...



THEOTHERONE! :D Could you review this: topic79389.html
Noob is a state of being, not a length of time. ~Ego

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Sat Apr 16, 2011 9:15 pm
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theotherone says...



SOLVARY! It's done. ;)

Somebody else?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Mon Apr 25, 2011 11:26 pm
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UnicornNerd says...



Please review My novel, the Shift!! Kthnxbai!!!!!
  





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Fri May 27, 2011 12:50 am
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theotherone says...



Anyone else need some reviews? I'm back and ready for it! ;)
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  





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Fri May 27, 2011 1:17 am
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Jas says...



post854585.html#p854585

That please? It's a little old but I edited it a lot and want to see whether the revisions were any good. :D

Grammar and spelling and such don't matter very much. It's more of the plot and characters that's important to me.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Fri May 27, 2011 1:44 am
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theotherone says...



Jas, I'm glad to say your review is done!

Anyone else up to give me some work?
Behind every mask, lies a man that can't live in his own skin. - Woe is Me <3
Need a reviewer? I don't bite, I promise. :) ---> viewtopic.php?f=188&t=76466
  








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