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Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:57 pm
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FLyerS says...



If you want to hear the truth about how good your writing is, ask me. I will be as ruthless as necessary. Obviously, it will be constructive criticism, but it will be tough. I love poetry, and will read through looong poems. I will also do novels. Full-length or half-finished. I probably won't comment on little spelling or punctuation mistakes, unless it's really terrible. I will, however comment on grammar.
If possible, if I review something of yours, I would like a review in return, it's only fair.
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:35 pm
Rascalover says...



Hey can you pretty please review chapter two of my romantic fiction novel My New Home. topic76151.html#p820675

Please and thank you,
Tiffany
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html





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Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:23 am
FLyerS says...



All done, anyone else?
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:27 am
rolf18 says...



Yes! If you could please review mine! Currently I just have the prologue up (though I've written the whole thing).

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Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:29 pm
FLyerS says...



All finished!
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Tue Feb 22, 2011 1:36 am
megsug says...



Will you review short stories?
If so, viewtopic.php?t=76291
Pretty please.
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Tue Feb 22, 2011 3:32 am
PaulClover says...



Part one of my sci-fi/horror short story

viewtopic.php?t=76659

Please be EXTREMELY brutally honest for this one!
Remember your name. Do not lose hope — what you seek will be found. Trust ghosts. Trust those that you have helped to help you in their turn. Trust dreams. Trust your heart, and trust your story. - Neil Gaiman





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Wed Feb 23, 2011 8:53 pm
FLyerS says...



Done, and done! Remember, review me back please!
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Mon Feb 19, 2024 7:03 pm
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