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Sat Feb 19, 2011 1:07 am
Gladius says...



322sivart wrote:Do you post any written work on this site? If you do, let me know on my WRFF thread.

In fact I do. :P (For future reference, to find out what other works a member has, simply click on their name and the "portfolio" tab on their profile, then browse as much as you want. ^^)

This story in particular needs some love. It is fanfiction, though, and I know some people can't handle that, but that's mostly what I write so I figured I'd warn you now. ^^;
When Heroes fall and the Sacred Blade is captured, can Evil be stopped?~The Wings of Darkness

I'm also ZeldaMoogle on Fanfiction.net!

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Sun Feb 20, 2011 1:24 am
322sivart says...



Done!
Need reviews?
I'd be happy to give them.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76104.html
  





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Tue Feb 22, 2011 2:35 am
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KatTrain says...



Will you please review my poem, Handwriting?
thank you. :]
topic76609.html
So, a dyslexic man walks into a bra....
  





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Tue Feb 22, 2011 3:37 am
PaulClover says...



Part one of my three-part sci-fi story

viewtopic.php?t=76659

Please & thank you :)
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Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:54 pm
322sivart says...



No problem. Both reviews are done.
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 9:22 pm
megsug says...



Hey,
You said you were going to review this, but I decided to ask for it. Please review Chapter One of The Masquerader for me. Here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=68961
Thanks.
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:51 pm
sarebear says...



Hi,

I'm here for a review! I wrote this poem in memoriam for my grandpa, which I hope to get published and need as many reviews on as possible! Thanks for your help!

Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76809.html

Thanks!

Sarebear
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 10:59 pm
Jas says...



topic76804.html

Review please :)
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Sun Feb 27, 2011 12:29 am
322sivart says...



All done!
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I'd be happy to give them.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76104.html
  





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Sun Feb 27, 2011 2:05 am
Kiicoh says...



Review a couple pieces of mine? Pretty please? :)

"Progression" - Poem
viewtopic.php?t=76329

"Taylor's Treasures" - Short Story
viewtopic.php?t=76825

Please and thank you so much!

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Mon Feb 28, 2011 1:00 am
SmileLikeUMeanIt says...



Hi! I've read some of your other reviews on Young Writers and I really trust your opinion. If you have time (seems like you've been pretty busy), could you review my poem "My Ghost and I"? viewtopic.php?t=76761
  





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Wed Mar 02, 2011 3:23 am
322sivart says...



Kiicoh, I'll be sure to review "Taylor's treasures" and SmileLikeUMeanIit, I'll get to your review as well, but maybe not for a few days. I'm really busy until maybe Thursday. But I will get to these.
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 3:11 am
Kafkaescence says...



I must once again request your services. Tear it apart, by all means.

post828997.html#p828997

:D
#TNT

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Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:37 pm
322sivart says...



Well, I'm back! And Kiicoh's and Smile's reviews are done. Now, on to Kafka's.....
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Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:51 pm
322sivart says...



And Kafka, yours is done.
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