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Tue Feb 08, 2011 8:32 pm
Wolferion says...



Cheers everybody!
Has been some time since I last time stepped in here. Now I'm back and even more fired up to continue writing and also to review, of course. I offer my reviews for free, so there's no need to hold back if you're looking for people who'd give you an opinion and help you out, if possible.

Anyways, I'm going to specify what I can do for you.

I will review :
Any kind of fiction except Historical fiction and Fan-fiction. If you want to know what I'm best at, that'd be Sci-Fi and kind of Romance/Fantasy.

Poetry in overall, so far I've done the best in Dramatic Poetry.

Well, I kind of have already said what I won't review, haven't I ^^' . Anyways, If you'd like to know what I focus on in my reviews, that'd be pretty much the feeling of your story, how it feels, how is it enjoyable. Think of it as a review from a reader. Additionaly to that I of course look for grammar mistakes, confusing places and I always try to try my best at giving tips for improvement, if they are needed.

So, if you're looking for help and you don't mind posting one more post here, I'd be glad to look at your work. I usually finish the reviews in the same day as I was asked in, sometimes one day later, but not later than that.

Best regards,
Kyou ~
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 8:35 pm
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Hi there! :)

Can you please take a look at this poem? I'd really, really appreciate it. :)

Thanks!
-Coral-





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Wed Feb 09, 2011 5:50 am
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Done! Anybody else? =)
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:18 pm
FLyerS says...



Hey, Can you review this please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=76271
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Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:02 am
Wolferion says...



All done! =) Anybody else?
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Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:21 pm
RainWanderer says...



-mission impossible theme-
*sneaks in, dodges lasers security*
*lock picking Ryousuke's office door*
*places story on Ryousuke's desk*
*open window and jumps out, then flies away with ninja kite*
Who am I? Just a wanderer, traveling from real life to dreams.

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Wed Feb 16, 2011 4:21 pm
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Done! Somebody else?
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Fri Apr 01, 2011 9:00 pm
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It's not like I'm going to bite >=0
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Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:04 pm
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Could you review this post841635.html#p841635 for me?
Oh and thanks in advance :D
~Tinkem
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Wed Mar 13, 2024 4:26 pm
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Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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