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The Angel is Busy Fighting a Heavenly War as of Now *closed*



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Fri Jan 28, 2011 11:45 pm
Button says...



I’m tryin’ this out. Let’s see how it goes.
You give me stuff to review. I will review it. I won't need much in return. If you're feeling really generous, a response saying how my review was will suffice. Or a piece of your undying soul. It really is up to you.
Here are the rules.

I will review this stuff, with these levels of enthusiasm/elation:


Life Fulfillment:
Poetry
Art/Photography

I Can Handle This, Right? Right.:
General Fiction Short Stories
Fantasy Short Stories
Science Fiction Short Stories
Action/Adventure Short Stories
Lyrics

I Think You’re Probably Out to Get Me:

Scripts
Romantic Short Stories
Historical Short Stories

You Have Killed My Soul, and I’m Afraid That I Must Now Devour You:
Any novel. At all. (This is probably for your own good)
Fan-Fiction (unless I know it: post it, and I’ll PM you)
Non-Fiction (Definitely for your own good)


Please only request one (maybe two, providing they aren’t epic-length pieces) piece at a time, and a link. Links are pretty handy-dandy, as they allow me to actually get at your work.
Please keep in mind that I am quite lazy, so I will probably get to your critique in about an hour to four days or so. If I haven’t, feel free to send me an aggressive PM demanding one. All-caps is acceptable, in this situation.

Now get to begging and copying/pasting.
Last edited by Button on Tue Feb 22, 2011 7:14 pm, edited 6 times in total.





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Sat Jan 29, 2011 12:08 am
Elinor says...



Hey, Persephoneia!

Could you review this poem for me? Thanks much. :)

All our dreams can come true — if we have the courage to pursue them.

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Sat Jan 29, 2011 1:32 am
lilymoore says...



Review for a review?

^^
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75351.html
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.





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Sat Jan 29, 2011 1:56 am
Button says...



Done and done. :)





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Sun Jan 30, 2011 1:02 am
AngerManagement says...



Simply because you love me, you'll review my
Spoiler! :
novel -It's a maybe first chapter-
topic75600.html
Dont tell me the moon is shining, show me the glint of light on broken glass.

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Sun Jan 30, 2011 12:42 pm
Button says...



It hath been devoured.





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Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:57 pm
DaSpetsnaz says...



Can you review my photos?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75638.html
"Is this the real life, or is this just fantasy? Caught in a landslide, no escape from reality."

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Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:02 pm
LadySpark says...



hi! would you please review my poem The writer's pen ??

viewtopic.php?t=75670

thanks in advance!
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hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:17 pm
Vampyre says...



Hey, would you be able to nom my poem? It has chocolate in it :D
A Kiss That Means Nothing (Who needs love, anyway...)

Thanks :)
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades







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Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:24 am
Kaitlin says...



I'd definitely give a piece of my soul for a review of this.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=75648





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Wed Feb 02, 2011 9:47 pm
Button says...



All done, Vampyre-- sorry for the lameness.
And Kaitlin, you're up next, never fear!





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Thu Feb 03, 2011 6:15 am
lilgreendots says...



Hey can you please review this for me post817820.html#p817820 Thanks in advance!
Incarceron is a prison like no other
It gives life
It deals death

It Watches All

Incarceron
By: Catherine Fisher


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Sun Feb 06, 2011 10:00 am
Button says...



Commands complete.





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Sun Feb 06, 2011 3:35 pm
LookUpThere says...



Pers has a Review Shack! I'm gonna be visiting here when I start writing again.








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