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Sat Jun 18, 2011 5:02 am
KatTrain says...



topic82695.html

With sugar on top?! :]
So, a dyslexic man walks into a bra....
  





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Sat Jun 18, 2011 11:10 pm
FRAYEDjade says...



It would be great if you could review this for me..
viewtopic.php?t=82679
Thanks!
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Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:12 am
lilymoore says...



Donesies! Anyone else?
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Tue Jun 21, 2011 12:29 am
Sierra says...



topic82717.html

Will you please review this for me? I'm thinking of submitting it in a contest, and I want it to be win-material.
What a shame,
We used to be such fragile broken things.
  





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Wed Jun 22, 2011 8:02 am
cupcake says...



If you have time can you please review my poem?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic82977.html
Thank you in advance!!!
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Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:25 pm
Kagi says...



Hai ily rawr XD

Wanna take a crack at this?
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If, when you mean to type yes you type yws, you know you belong. :P
  





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Sun Jul 03, 2011 11:51 pm
HostofHorus says...



Lilly! Can you review my poem? It's not too good but whatever, tear it up. post881012.html#p881012
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:39 pm
ZannaShepherd says...



Hi,
I have a couple pieces with only 1 or 2 comments on them that I'd love another opinion on, and I'd really appreciate it if you'd review them.
Thanks!

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In order to write about life, first you must live it!

Ernest Hemingway

Hmm, must be why I only write fantasy, that's the only life I've ever lived.
~Zanna
  





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Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:04 pm
Boolovesyou says...



Please review this short poem for me!

topic83869.html

Thanks!
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