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Fri Jan 28, 2011 3:56 pm
lilymoore says...



What genres I like to review: Romantic Fiction, Fantasy Fiction, Science Fiction, Other Fiction, Historical Fiction, and Art.

What genre I don't mind reviewing: Any of the Poetry as well as Scripts, Lyrics, and Miscellaneous.

What genres I don't like to review: Action/Adventure and Non-Fiction. (And even then I'll make exceptions.)

Also, rating and such are no issue for me along the lines of swearing but explicitly sexual content is probably going to be a no no.

As a rule, I don't like to review chapters unless it's a first or if it includes a summary at the beginning so keep that in mind too please.

How I Review:
Generally, if the nitpicks of a story haven’t been picked out already, I’ll go through and find any grammar or style errors that I catch. After that, I’ll focus on certain things that need to be worked on in the story or aspects of it that really outshined the rest then give an overall view. This goes for poetry as well. My reviews differ slightly though depending on whether it’s prose, poetry, art, or other.


Now, go ahead, ask away!!!
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 5:02 pm
AquaMarine says...



A poetry review, please? :) post814630.html

I'm struggling with the ending slightly, so any thoughts on that would be great. Obviously anything you can say about it is wonderful and useful.

Thanks!
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:11 pm
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*licks fingers clean of Aqua and ketchup*

Anyone else?
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:18 pm
Button says...



If you have some time, could you please take a peek at this poem?
topic75547.html

Thanks so much! Really appreciate it :)
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Fri Jan 28, 2011 9:43 pm
Elinor says...



Hi, Lily! Could you review this poem for me? topic75504.html

Thanks much. :)

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Sat Jan 29, 2011 3:22 am
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Finger-lickin good!
But who will be my next victim?
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 5:06 pm
Sins says...



H'okay, before I request, I have a question. Do you mind reviewing something with loads of reviews already? xD If so, I'll gradually fade into the distance...
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Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:58 pm
DaSpetsnaz says...



Can you review my photos?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75638.html
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Mon Jan 31, 2011 9:19 pm
Vampyre says...



Hello!

Would you mind reviewing my poem, A Kiss That Means Nothing (Who needs love, anyway...)
It has chocolate in it :D
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades


  





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Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:00 am
cannoncomplex says...



hey, lily can you review a piece of work for a YWS contest? thanks.

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Tue Feb 01, 2011 3:02 am
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Hey, Lily!
If you wouldn't mind, I do have a beginning chapter that I would really love a review from you on.
Here's the link:
topic72795.html

Thank you!
-Maddy
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Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:18 am
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*takes the closed sign off of the door*
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Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:38 am
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:D Please?

THANKSSOMUCHYOUAREAMAZING! :D
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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Thu Mar 03, 2011 4:40 am
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If you've got the time, I would love a review on this

Please and thank you!

Tiff <3
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Fri Mar 04, 2011 12:31 am
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Donesies!
Who's next?
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Homo sum, humani nihil a me alienum puto (I am a man, I don't consider anything human foreign to me)
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