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Wed Jan 26, 2011 10:40 pm

Razcoon says...

Do you write lyrics and want to improve? No? Get out of here! D:

I kid. Simply looking at the Lyrics forum, it's clear that the lyricists on this site need more thorough, more descriptive reviews. So lay 'em on me, folks!

(I also do short poems! However...lyrics take priority.)

>>Annie<<
P.S. If you post here, I will love you forever.

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Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:09 am

dasiamari says...

viewtopic.php?t=58891 here you go I think thats a link sorry if its not I dont really know how to post them

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Sat Feb 19, 2011 6:10 am

dasiamari says...

viewtopic.php?t=61666 this one to

Know that she's back in the atmosphere I'm afraid that she'll think of me as a plain old Jain told a story 'bout a man who was to afraid to fly so he never did land. ~Train

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Sat Feb 19, 2011 7:28 pm

Razcoon says...

Yup, that's a link! If you want to add words to your link, you can do this without the spaces: [ url = link ] words [ / url ]

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Mon Feb 21, 2011 4:20 pm

MilkNCookies says...

Ohh! Please review...?!

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Wed Mar 16, 2011 8:03 pm

ehte92 says...

Please review this!!

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Fri Apr 15, 2011 3:13 am

fireheartedkaratepup says...

http://youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=79137

Be as critical as you possibly can, please. I feel kinda bad about asking cuz Mustard's already reviewed, but..........I want this to really shine, so I want as much feedback as possible.

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Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:16 am

ArcticMonkey says...

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There is the link to that song... Finaly ^_^

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Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:25 pm

evfreak13 says...

I'm about to go on a review run (there's so much cool stuff out there!) but I just wanted to see if you could take a look on this..it's only my second song.

Is it okay if I post it onto here?

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Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:41 pm

Razcoon says...

Well, what you do is you post it on YWS and link me in this thread. I can't do a review here. ^^

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Sat Jun 11, 2011 1:49 am

Jashael says...

Hey, Annie... how are you? Mind reviewing me this:

post871825.html#p871825

Thanks a bunch. =D

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