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Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:36 pm
TriO says...



Howdy, y'all. I'm in a bit of a pickle, y'see. Some darn'd cayote done stole my boots, and Lethy won't sell me more til I get some points and reviews on the board... so, here's my proposition:

You send me links to your various pieces, and I'll get back to them asap.

1) I never do 'low' reviews. Expect at least 500 characters (for a piece I don't like), and about 1500 average.
2) I am more 'at one' with poetry, so if you have a poem, I'm your guy! Short stories and novels may take slightly longer to do, but I will see to them when I can. I reserve the right to refuse full novel requests (for the sole reason that I have a fair amount of coursework to get through as well. Not because I don't like novels. :P)
3) All content accepted. E to 18 and beyond!
4) Feel free to ask for specific chapter reviews, but I will not review segments of chapters (that's just highly inconvenient...).

Please donate generously to this needy cause, as I need boots for walking, otherwise, I'll never make it to Hollywood...
Last edited by TriO on Tue Feb 01, 2011 7:03 am, edited 2 times in total.
There will come a time you'll see, with no more tears
and love will not break your heart, but dismiss your fears.
Get over your hill and see what you find there
with grace in your heart and flowers in your hair.
~Mumford and Sons


My name is ElderMimmi.





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Fri Jan 21, 2011 9:33 pm
Emmzziee says...



Ooh cool :D it'd be just awesome if you could review my lil' poem for me :)
viewtopic.php?t=75099
Xxx
I want to play a game.





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Sat Jan 22, 2011 3:48 am
TriO says...



Emmzziee wrote:Ooh cool :D it'd be just awesome if you could review my lil' poem for me :)
viewtopic.php?t=75099
Xxx

Done!
There will come a time you'll see, with no more tears
and love will not break your heart, but dismiss your fears.
Get over your hill and see what you find there
with grace in your heart and flowers in your hair.
~Mumford and Sons


My name is ElderMimmi.





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Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:58 pm
Hecate says...



Hey! I was wondering if you could have a look at my prologue of my new novel! It's General Fiction, it's pretty short. Thanks.

topic75188.html





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Sat Jan 22, 2011 4:15 pm
TriO says...



stelagineva wrote:Hey! I was wondering if you could have a look at my prologue of my new novel! It's General Fiction, it's pretty short. Thanks.

topic75188.html

Done!
There will come a time you'll see, with no more tears
and love will not break your heart, but dismiss your fears.
Get over your hill and see what you find there
with grace in your heart and flowers in your hair.
~Mumford and Sons


My name is ElderMimmi.





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Sat Jan 22, 2011 4:22 pm
MiaParamore says...



Could you do this? Please and thanks. Let me know if there's some fiction you'd like reviewed.

~Shrubbery
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:23 am
Button says...



Hey, if you find some spare time, could you please take a peek at this poem?

topic75208.html


Thanks! Really appreciate it. :)
-Coral-





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Tue Jan 25, 2011 12:35 pm
TriO says...



Persephoneia wrote:Hey, if you find some spare time, could you please take a peek at this poem?

topic75208.html


Thanks! Really appreciate it. :)
-Coral-

Done!
There will come a time you'll see, with no more tears
and love will not break your heart, but dismiss your fears.
Get over your hill and see what you find there
with grace in your heart and flowers in your hair.
~Mumford and Sons


My name is ElderMimmi.





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Sat Jan 29, 2011 2:09 pm
LadySpark says...



Hi big brother!!!!!!!
Got a poem for you to review.
(What kind of sister would I be if I didn't get you out of a pickle?hm?

It's called Coal Miner's daughter, and all facts are true and its really by a coal miner's daughter (ME!)

post813882.html#p813882

Thanks Sean!
*gives hug*
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Sat Jan 29, 2011 5:58 pm
TriO says...



'Tis done, sis! *hugs back*
There will come a time you'll see, with no more tears
and love will not break your heart, but dismiss your fears.
Get over your hill and see what you find there
with grace in your heart and flowers in your hair.
~Mumford and Sons


My name is ElderMimmi.





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Mon Jan 31, 2011 6:01 pm
LadySpark says...



Hi Big brother!!!!
*gives huge hug*
I have yet another poem to be reviewed.
It's called the Writer's Pen.
Please review *puppy dog eyes*
viewtopic.php?t=75670
Loffs,
Lil' sis
hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Tue Feb 01, 2011 1:46 am
TriO says...



Done! Moar Reviews PLEASE!
There will come a time you'll see, with no more tears
and love will not break your heart, but dismiss your fears.
Get over your hill and see what you find there
with grace in your heart and flowers in your hair.
~Mumford and Sons


My name is ElderMimmi.





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Tue Feb 01, 2011 8:49 am
Vampyre says...



Hey, would you mind reviewing this?
'Tis my latest poem :D
A Kiss That Means Nothing (Who Needs Love, Anyway...)
Thankin' ye kindly :P
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades







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Tue Feb 01, 2011 12:35 pm
Flower~Child says...



I have a poem if you don't mind. topic75705.html
My reality comes to a close as I once again realize that you don't love me, and even if I love you with my everything you will never care.






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