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A Very... er... Sort Of Empty Review Thread



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Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:48 pm
megsug says...



Hi, I'm ready to review.

I won't review:
poetry (I don't know anything about it.)
scripts
or lyrics

I will review non-fiction, but I'm not very interested.

I don't know much about fanfiction. I'm guessing it reads like any prose, but I could be wrong. I will review, but don't expect much.

If you're not good a commas and periods, you've come to the right place. I may give a comment... or a paragraph on whether something is relevent or believable or if I like where the plot is going. If you have something you want me to focus on, tell me and I'll do my best.

What do I want... I need some followers for my novel. If you guys could just read the prologue and tell me what you think, that would be enough. Of course, if you want to continue, I can't stop you. :wink:
If you could give me some feedback on this thread, I'm a little self-consious of my reviews. Those of you who frequently request don't have to do this.

Thank you and let the reviews come!
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:37 pm
Sins says...



Hey, Meg. :)

I thought I'd bump this for you and ask for a review in the meantime. xD You don't have to do this because I want you to review a fifth part (The first part of chapter three) of a novel for me... Obviously, you might not feel comfortable doing that, so it's completely fine if you don't.

topic75164.html

Please and thank you!
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Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:56 pm
megsug says...



Skins is done. Anybody else? *Staring at the still door, Megsug sighs and begins to ring the bell on her desk for fun.*
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:07 pm
AllyGrLxOX says...



Hey there I'm Ally!
If you need something to review I could use some feedback on this:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76257.html

Pweease review! :D
HEY YOU!
Yeah you! :D

You should check out my latest novel "Part of the Night!"
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=877
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:24 pm
megsug says...



Ally is done... Imagining a line reaching outside the door. Ahh...
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:31 pm
CaseySaz says...



Hello there!
Do you think you could review my short story?
topic76101.html
Thanks in advance!
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:00 pm
megsug says...



Casey is done. That was great. Maybe this thread isn't so empty...
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:09 pm
RainWanderer says...



*sneaks in while meg is not paying attention*
*places a story on the desk*
*sneaks out*
Who am I? Just a wanderer, traveling from real life to dreams.

“Writing a book is a very lonely business. You are totally cut off from the rest of the world, submerged in your obsessions and memories.” - Mario Vargas Llosa
  





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Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:08 pm
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Where ever this story came from, it's finished. Thank you, RainWanderer. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'm afraid I can't make any more cheesy jokes about having an empty shop. Thank you review needers everywhere. I'm ready for another one.
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:35 pm
Rascalover says...



Hey can you pretty please review chapter two of my romantic fiction novel My New Home. topic76151.html#p820675

Please and thank you,
Tiffany
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:01 pm
megsug says...



Rascal is finished. Whoo, four in one day. Does that count as a line?
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Mon Feb 14, 2011 8:27 pm
322sivart says...



Hey Megs,
You reviewed the first chapter of my novel, and I really liked your review. Could you review the second chapter?

topic76316.html

Thanks in advance!
-Alex
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Mon Feb 14, 2011 10:49 pm
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322sivart is complete... I'm trying to think of something witty to say
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Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:32 am
snoopysoap says...



hey megsug. this is my novel that i think is really bad cause i has no idea what im doing. topic60721.html review to your hearts content.
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Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:43 pm
xiodinex says...



and

viewtopic.php?t=74905

BAM. a wild topic appeared. wild topic attacked! review?

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