Please can you review this for me? I can't put the two chapters I have done into one novel because I am not very good with YWS, so if you want to read the other chapter, it is in my portfolio under '[untitled novel]'. The two chapters are similar, but I just wanted to show the same events through different characters eyes. Lofty >.<
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I have a Gumbie Cat in mind, her name is Jennyanydots; Her coat is one of the tabby kind,with tiger stripes and leopard spots. — T.S. Eliot, Old Possum's Book of Practical Cats
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