Please can you review this for me? I can't put the two chapters I have done into one novel because I am not very good with YWS, so if you want to read the other chapter, it is in my portfolio under '[untitled novel]'. The two chapters are similar, but I just wanted to show the same events through different characters eyes. Lofty >.<
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