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Sat Apr 30, 2011 4:55 pm
IcyFlame says...

I feel bad for constantly posting on here :(
“I don’t expect you will really understand the beauty of the softly simmering cauldron with its shimmering fumes, the delicate power of liquids that creep through human veins, bewitching the mind, ensnaring the senses...”

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Tue May 24, 2011 1:38 pm
Spitfire says...

Finished everything a while ago..

Anyone want a review? 8)
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Punctuation is the difference between "Let's eat, Grandma" and "Let's eat Grandma".

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Thu Nov 10, 2011 6:25 pm
Lofty says...


Please can you review this for me?
I can't put the two chapters I have done into one novel because I am not very good with YWS, so if you want to read the other chapter, it is in my portfolio under '[untitled novel]'.
The two chapters are similar, but I just wanted to show the same events through different characters eyes.
Lofty >.<
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Thu Nov 10, 2011 7:46 pm
Rascalover says...

I need a review please


It's romantic fiction.
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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