“I don’t expect you will really understand the beauty of the softly simmering cauldron with its shimmering fumes, the delicate power of liquids that creep through human veins, bewitching the mind, ensnaring the senses...”
Please can you review this for me? I can't put the two chapters I have done into one novel because I am not very good with YWS, so if you want to read the other chapter, it is in my portfolio under '[untitled novel]'. The two chapters are similar, but I just wanted to show the same events through different characters eyes. Lofty >.<
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