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Thu Mar 03, 2011 8:58 pm
Sins says...



*Saves spot for review request* Can I do that?

I don't want to wiegh you down with even more requests, so can I just save a spot? xD
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:11 pm
ultraviolet says...



You're Skinsles, you can do anything!

But definitely. I'd love to review you (though I'd probably feel really inadequate considering your reviews are some of my favorite ever). But you can put up what you want now (I'm assuming Stop and Stare) so I can put it up, though I can pretty much guarantee it'll take a while.

Oh, and The Magi is officially done, until pointe posts more. I've been working on getting that all complete, but now I'll move on to the rest of y'all. So again, sorry for the lag.

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Sat Mar 05, 2011 1:08 am
Sins says...



Ah... You know me so well, my friend. novel.php?id=915

Honestly though, there's no rush, especially because I'm making you read all of that. *points at link*. I'm patient, and half of the time, I forget who I requested reviews from... So yeah, no rush.
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Sat Mar 12, 2011 4:56 pm
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(I was going to just add an edit into the post above, but then I was paranoid that you wouldn't get notified/notice it. 'Cause I'm paranoid like that.)

I just want to say that I'm actually rewriting a lot of the novel I requested you to review. I'm keeping the first four parts posted, but I'm scrapping the stuff after that. Basically, don't worry about reviewing Chapter 3.1 onwards. :P
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Sat Mar 12, 2011 5:12 pm
BenFranks says...



Evenin' Miss UV. I have a newly spawned novel of mine I'd like you to have a peak at - I'm hoping it'll be a "fun" action and adventure but we'll let you be the judge of that ;) I'm uploading a chapter a week so my lovely reviewer's can keep up and I can keep up with the old edits!

Here's the novel front page: The Consultants
  





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Wed Mar 16, 2011 11:15 pm
Piper says...



I'm going to talk to my partner, but we have a novel that You could review. More information later...as is soon
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Thu Mar 17, 2011 11:10 pm
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I'm back :) Here is the link to the...1st chapter I believe
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Sat Mar 19, 2011 1:54 pm
writerwithacause says...



Hey there, ultraviolet!

Would you mind taking a look at my novel? novel.php?id=1118 I could use some reviews on this one. :) Even though it's under the Historical Fiction category, I assure you it's almost completely made up, and it's rather romance than historical.
Plus, I'm more interested in reading reviews on how the characters and their relationship is developing, rather than comments upon the historical accuracy. ;)

Take you time and thank you very much in advance!
Julie, a sucker for romance, historical fashion, medieval fairs and blues music. Add photography and you already know me 50%. The rest of me you'll discover through my writings and my photos.

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my greatest project, a history-inspired romance
  





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Mon Mar 21, 2011 2:04 am
dasiamari says...



Can you review Love in the rain the link is in the signature . just go to the top a push view novel well I`m sure you know how it works so... THANKS!
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Mon Mar 21, 2011 11:52 pm
Rascalover says...



Will you please review chapter three of my romantic novel viewtopic.php?t=77710 please
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Tue Mar 22, 2011 10:07 pm
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LadyFreeWill says...



This is incomplete, but I'd really like some reviews. Could you take a look, please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=1223
Thanks!
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Wed Apr 06, 2011 9:42 am
IcyFlame says...



When you get the time...
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Tue Apr 12, 2011 10:02 pm
ultraviolet says...



I've updated my page. I'm really sorry it's taken so long to get to everyone. I'm not exactly a prolific reviewer, and been busy lately. So if you hate me, you deserve to - I probably would if I were you too. If I get any more requests, I'll probably temporarily close this until I finish them all because with every new request comes on average five new reviews to be done, which means it takes a long time to get completely caught up. But just so you know, I have been working on this, a little every day or so. I hope to get completely caught up by summer time, so if you can't wait that long, if you haven't already I'd say ask more people (I recommend Azila, Skins, or PinShearwater among many great reviewers).

Again, sorry for being such a sucky reviewer.

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Sun May 01, 2011 1:31 am
megsug says...



Thanks for the reviews. I've been in an anti-editing mood, but I'll get around to making some changes. Here's chapter six.
post853692.html#p853692
This and maybe the next part will clear up a few of your questions.
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Mon May 02, 2011 3:11 am
Chickensandwitch says...



Hello ultraviolet. I was wondering if you could possibly review my novel, Disease. topic80259.html

you don't have to review chapters 1 and 2, but it would probably be helpful if you read them. Thank you! :D
  








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