z

Young Writers Society


Desperate for Reviews!



Random avatar


Gender: Female
Points: 4670
Reviews: 51
Wed Jan 12, 2011 7:34 am
lilgreendots says...



In my signature I had asked if anyone needed reviews, and I haven't gotten any feedback, so I thought I'd post here.


Listed below is everything you need to know about my reviews (:



Poetry

Dramatic
Narrative
Lyric
Other

That's pretty much all poetry, but I was in the mood to type them all :P

For poetry reviews I will usually just give writing feedback without quoting it. I don't give full grammar reviews on poems, but I will point out a couple of things that may catch my eye.

Fiction Short Stories

Fantasy
Romantic
General
Historical
Action/Adventure (I know Action/Adventure are in one category, but I prefer Adventure stories, to Action stories)

For Short Stories I quote the piece and give grammar comments in one color, and my comments bolded. After that I have a short paragraph giving my overall feedback.

Fiction Novels

Romantic
Fantasy
General

Novel reviews would be the same as short story reviews, so I'm not going to bother typing it again :smt003

Misc. Work

Any type of art is fine :smt001
Other Works(depending on what it is)

Things that I don't Review

Fanfiction Short Stories and Novels
Science Fiction Short Stories and Novels
Non Fiction Pieces
Advanced Critiques
Photography
Lyrics
Scripts

Length

I don't mind the length of the piece, unless it is SUPER long.


I don't request anything in return but, you could leave a post on my wall, follow me *on YWS not in really life :pirate3: * review any of my works, or nominate me for the Reviewer 1 badge.

You can ask for reviews here on this thread or you can post a comment on my wall, or you can pm me. Oh and just in case I forget, Thank You all in advance!


-lilgreendots <3
Incarceron is a prison like no other
It gives life
It deals death

It Watches All

Incarceron
By: Catherine Fisher


For more information about the book click here!

Need a Review Click Here!





User avatar
33 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 240
Reviews: 33
Sun Jan 16, 2011 4:18 pm
TheAlphaBunny says...



Hee hee feel free to review anything of mine (even my single awful poem^^'). I just saw this topic on my feed, so I thought I'd post a reply for ye. :]
"I can have oodles of charm when I want to." --Kurt Vonnegut Jr.





User avatar



Gender: None specified
Points: 1040
Reviews: 4
Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:02 pm
Kilo says...



Please review some of my work, i'd really appreciate it :)
_____________________________________________________
Thanks, -Kilo :)
All I'm writing is just what I feel, that's all.-Jimi Hendrix
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream.-Edgar Allan Poe
A dream you dream alone is only a dream. A dream you dream together is reality.-John Lennon





Random avatar


Gender: Female
Points: 4670
Reviews: 51
Mon Jan 17, 2011 5:38 am
lilgreendots says...



Hey Kilo, can you post a url of a specific piece?
Incarceron is a prison like no other
It gives life
It deals death

It Watches All

Incarceron
By: Catherine Fisher


For more information about the book click here!

Need a Review Click Here!





User avatar
46 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 2614
Reviews: 46
Tue Jan 25, 2011 12:34 am
bookworm27 says...



I'd love a review if you have a chance! Take your pick!
-Booky
“Maybe it’s fate that Hound ate the map. Maybe we’ll discover soemthing wonderful while we’re lost.”-The Penderwicks





User avatar
47 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 269
Reviews: 47
Fri Jan 28, 2011 8:28 pm
Skorpionne says...



Could you please review my poem; How Sad is the Peacock? You'll find it on page 2 or 3 of Dramatic Poetry. I'm thinking of submitting it to the YWS lit journal, so could you please take the time to throughly abuse it? Thanks.
I've learned so much from people who never existed - Unknown





Random avatar


Gender: Female
Points: 4670
Reviews: 51
Sat Jan 29, 2011 3:53 am
lilgreendots says...



Skorpionne,done with the review.
Incarceron is a prison like no other
It gives life
It deals death

It Watches All

Incarceron
By: Catherine Fisher


For more information about the book click here!

Need a Review Click Here!





User avatar
532 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 27927
Reviews: 532
Sat Jan 29, 2011 9:44 am
ArcticMonkey says...



Dotty! Long time no speak, right? Anyhow, could you review this for me?
post814819.html
Please and thankyou (It's chapter one of a story I'm writing)
Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.





Random avatar


Gender: Female
Points: 4670
Reviews: 51
Thu Feb 03, 2011 2:43 am
lilgreendots says...



I finished the review, anyone else?
Incarceron is a prison like no other
It gives life
It deals death

It Watches All

Incarceron
By: Catherine Fisher


For more information about the book click here!

Need a Review Click Here!





User avatar
562 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 719
Reviews: 562
Wed Feb 09, 2011 10:49 pm
Button says...



Hi there! :)
Could you please take a look at this:

topic76134.html ?

I'd really appreciate it. :)
Thanks!
-Coral-





User avatar
120 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 444
Reviews: 120
Fri Feb 11, 2011 8:29 pm
Emmzziee says...



Thank youuu :D
viewtopic.php?t=76167
I want to play a game.





User avatar
131 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 3181
Reviews: 131
Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:22 pm
322sivart says...



Hi, could you take a look at these lyrics?
topic76255.html
thanks in advance!
-Alex
Need reviews?
I'd be happy to give them.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76104.html





User avatar
131 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 3181
Reviews: 131
Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:23 pm
View Likes
322sivart says...



Oh, sorry. I didn't read that you don't review lyrics, hahah. Nevermind.
Need reviews?
I'd be happy to give them.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76104.html





User avatar
38 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 2011
Reviews: 38
Mon Apr 25, 2011 2:53 pm
thatboy says...



Hi, just found a great review you did. So I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reviewing a chapter or two of a fantasy story I'm writing called Empire.

Here's the first chapter:
viewtopic.php?t=78667

or here's the novel page:
novel.php?id=1296

This would be really appreciated; I haven't had many reviews so far.
Thanks.
-thatboy
It's not what life makes of you;
But what you make of life.





User avatar
166 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 9676
Reviews: 166
Mon Mar 11, 2024 6:09 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE
Imagination is a superpower. Use it well!








As a writer, I'm more interested in what people tell themselves happened rather than what actually happened.
— Kazuo Ishiguro