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Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:09 pm
beckiw says...



Well I haven't been reviewing a whole lot at all. Final year in university can do that to you. So I'm going to try an experiment! I figured that if people asked me for reviews on a WRFF thread then it might propel me into actually doing them. So here I am. Hopefully it will work but as my uni term goes on I might not have too much time to review but we'll see how it goes.

Now onto the good stuff! I'm not terribly good at grammar, punctuation and all that so I can't offer that type of nit pick review. Usually I tend to focus on characters, plot and dialogue. Bad dialogue is a pet peeve of mine so if you want someone to look through your dialogue I can do that.

Stuff I will Review -
Fantasy - This is my favourite genre
Sci-Fi
Romance
Other
Action/Adventure
Photography
Scripts

Stuff I may not review -
FanFiction - PM me and say what it is based off. If I don't know it, it is likely I won't review it
Historical Fiction - I can't do historical accuracy but I can review it just on a story level

Stuff I won't Review -
Poetry - because I don't read poetry and wouldn't know how to review it
Non-Fiction
Lyrics
Art - I'm no artist lol

As far as novels and short stories are concerned, my preference would be to short stories. I will review novels or novel chapters as long as I don't have to wade through 20 previous chapters. Also don't link me to 5 things at once. Just one at a time.


Just tell me the title
Tell me the genre
Give me the link


and I'll see what I can do :)
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Wed Feb 23, 2011 11:34 pm
Ego says...



Hi Becki :)

Please?

Emergence/Action-Adventure/link above.

Note: I really couldn't care less about grammar, punctuation, or spelling errors. I will find them myself on a later read through. I prefer overall opinions and thoughts on metaphor, plot, characters, and sentence structure.

Thanks ahead of time.

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Thu Feb 24, 2011 7:54 pm
writerwithacause says...



Hello Becki! I've got a romance novel that could use some reviews! Here it is: novel.php?id=1118 Thank you so much in advance, and take your time! :)
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Mon Feb 19, 2024 7:04 pm
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