Sci-fi novel I'm working on, only posted the prologue and chapter one so far. I've only got one review of it so far and I'd like to have a second opinion. Feel free to be harsh, I need to know if something is wrong with it! I don't prefer nitpicking though, I am aware that I make frequent typos/grammatical errors But if you want to nitpick, I'm ok with it, just so long as you give substantial other advice as well. I hope you like it!
Edit: I also posted chapter 2, but by no means am I trying to ask you to read that and chapter one and the short prologue, review it if you want but it's long so I'm not specifically asking you to
Look at me still talking when there's science to do!
Spoiler! :
The cake is a lie. Snape killed Dumbledore. He isn't really dead. Data dies at the end. The little girl kills them all.
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But if you want to nitpick, I'm ok with it, just so long as you give substantial other advice as well. I hope you like it!
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