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To celebrate the wonderful new year, I decided to make a Will Review for Food thread. I had one in the past, but it has long since gone numb and dead, buried away in the archives of this forum. Hence the entirely new thread, if you were even somewhat curious, which I highly doubt.

That aside, I figured that especially since I am getting back into a reviewing mode, it was time to start accepting requests. I will review most anything, and you do not have to worry about ratings with me. I do prefer not to review 18+, but if you are desperate for a review, do not hesitate to at least ask, as I usually will review it. Now, I generally am the best at romance, fantasy, and general fiction novels, writing-wise, however, as said before, I will review anything. My literary reviews tend to be slightly long nowadays, focusing on character and plot development, believable dialogue, pacing, and grammar/punctuation, among other things.

The reviews I quite possibly do the most of are art and photography. When you ask for an art and photography review by myself, you should expect a very long, in-depth review of your pieces. If we are dealing with artwork, I will let you know my overall thoughts of the piece along with mentioning what is wrong with shading, coloring, shapes, human/animal anatomy, among other things. If you request a photography review from me, you can expect me to focus on angles, lighting, technique, creativity, depth of focus, editing/cropping, etcetera. Art and photography reviews I do tend to be very thorough, so if you want a short, "that's good," don't request me.

Alright! I would love some requests right away, so feel free to post a link of the story here. Please only post one story for me to review at a time, and once I complete that review, you can post the other story's link. This way everyone can get their stories reviewed and the queue doesn't get too clogged up. OCD, here, guys.

Just an overview for those who didn't feel like reading through that is below.

Status: OPEN

Strong Points: romance fiction, fantasy fiction, fan-fiction, general fiction, art & photography

Weaker Points: non-fiction, lyrics, poetry

Thank you in advance for any requests.

xx Mizzle

Hey could you review these things for me? Thank you, for it is greatly appreiciated.
viewtopic.php?t=67996
and
viewtopic.php?t=71461 (There is a second one. It would be great if you would read it as well.)

Thanks again!

Could you review this for me??

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emmylou1995 - I have finished your first request and am working on your second.
Geronimo - I will get to yours after emmylou1995's are all finished.

Thanks for the requests, guys!

Emmylou1995, both of your reviews are now done! I am hope they help you out and thanks for the requests.

Geronimo, yours is finished, too! ;D

viewtopic.php?t=73950

Thank you so much!

Done. Sorry for the slight delay!

Hi there
If you have some extra time, could you please take a look at this?

topic74145.html

Thanks so much- really appreciate it!

Hey Mizzle-

Thanks AGAIN for the amazing review! That last story is under a lot of reconstruction now!

topic72211.html

This is the first story I wrote about Anna and Erik, and it's in Anna's POV, so you might not see much of Erik. You get the full circle here. There's a few details missing that could be added, but I left them out on purpose just so the story could be a little more simple.

Thanks!

Taylor

Hey Mizz! I got here eventually

Here is the story - topic74360.html

Knock yourself out. Though not literally...

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