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Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:22 pm
Button says...



If you have some spare time, could you please take a peek at this?

post808380.html#p808380

It'd be greatly appreciated. Thanks so much! :)





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Sun Jan 16, 2011 10:47 pm
Tigersprite says...



Could you please review this short story? I've got some great reviews already, so you whenever you have the time. Thanks in advance! :)

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Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:08 pm
Elinor says...



Tedus, Perseph, Tiger -- you guys are all up! I apologize for not getting to your reviews sooner as I have been without internet access for the past four days. Expect to see them very soon!

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Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:19 pm
LittlePrincess says...



Hi, I'd love a review of my story
Part 1 viewtopic.php?t=74886
Part 2 post810304.html#p810304
It's unfinished.. suggestions are welcome since i'm not 100% how its going to go. Thanks!
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Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:15 pm
Emmzziee says...



OH! ME ME ME :D
Please review my poem :)
You don't have too...
But it'd be just awesome if you would ;)
viewtopic.php?t=75099
Xxx
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Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:12 am
Elinor says...



All done at last, guys! Who's next?

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Fri Jan 21, 2011 1:17 am
Lumi says...



I'll give you cookies. :3

Edit: I guess it'd be good to note that the current form has not been reviewed. ;)
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Fri Jan 21, 2011 4:11 pm
Elinor says...



All finished, Lumi! Who is next?

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Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:46 pm
Sins says...



Hey there, Eli. :)

I'm stalking the WRFF threads right now, so I thought I'd request one here. Would you mind reviewing the next part of Stop and Stare for me? I've been having some real trouble with it, so don't expect it to be amazing or anything... That's why I need your help!

topic75164.html

Please and thank you!
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Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:53 pm
Hecate says...



Hey!
I just started working on a new project and this is basically the prologue.
topic75188.html

I'd love it if you could have a look at it. Thanks!





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Thu Jan 27, 2011 11:38 pm
Elinor says...



All done! Who's next?

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Sat Jan 29, 2011 4:44 am
thestorygirl says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75565.html reveiw please. its poetry. I dont care if its not your strong point. Help please.
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Sun Jan 30, 2011 10:26 pm
Elinor says...



Done!

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Mon Jan 31, 2011 3:56 pm
DaSpetsnaz says...



Could you review my photos?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic75638.html
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Tue Feb 01, 2011 12:57 am
cannoncomplex says...



hey, eli, can you review this for a contest i'm doing?
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